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This is a good story. It's well-written and has a nice ending. |
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I think that the obstacle that Harry and Hermione had to overcome in her inability to control the lower half of her body is a great basis for a story. I loved the anecdotal lessons in the story and I thought the harry and hermione you portrayed in this story were perfect. |
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I really enjoyed how you ended the story out. You didn't come up with some miracle cure for Hermione, via Harry or something of that nature. You also showed more depth to Harry then I've seen with a lot of people. You did a great job with this fic and should be extremely pleased with yourself.
Good job! |
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This one of the best post-war stories I've read. You've come up with a great way to gently remove Ron from Hermione's life and find a way for Harry to slip back in. It also works excellent with HBP. I lookforeward to reading the other chatpers and I'll review again after I've read the last one.
Keep up the good work and I lookfroeward to reading more of your fics.
Sincerely,
~Toby |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Loved your stories!
Here's hoping you meet your muse once again! *raises cup* |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 26/09/05
Oh i loved that ending, funny as hell  wasnt expecting that at all |
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 25/09/05
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 25/08/05
I'm confoosed. Why is Ron a SOB?? What does it have to do with that mediwitch?? Did he cheat on Hermione? |
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This is really moving, fantastic story. I appreciate the fact that Hermione did not, in fact, regain the use of her legs. If she had, it would have detracted greatly from the emotional impact of the story, in addition to being cliche. Well done. |
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I love your stories...I have read Triumph I don't know how many times. I just recently found out about your yahoo group, and this story. I love the first chapter, very awesome!!
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I am supposed to be working right now, but I think I a going to read the rest!! hehehe
Sean |
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 It was one of the most beautiful and touching fanfics I've read. I loved how you realized Hermione's state over her obstacle. And the way you described Harry's real love for her was deeply moving. Harry's little explanation about why he couldn't help but love her and about his nickname; birdman was unforgettably beautiful.  And in a way, I did like how you didn't try to make Hermione be able to walk again to let the story have it's disney type's happy ending. The Harry Potter(I'd like to mention him more like as Bird Man at this moment though  ) you wrote made my heart throb and melt. You really are an amazing author, you know that? |
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*tear...tear* That was sooo sweet. I was wondering where the nightingale thing came in and I thought that was the best way for it to end. |
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Rocky235Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 02/08/05
Thank you for sharing this with us. Thank you to your betas, too.
It was a very enjoyable read. |
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Rocky235Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 02/08/05
So, this isn't going to be a Harry/Ginny ship? lol
Very touching and well done in all aspects. |
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Rocky235Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 02/08/05
"...I'd be asking you to dinner."
I didn't see that coming. lol |
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