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MaDeLaiNe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/06/07
I can't believe I've found this story at last. I read it sometime ago, but I lost it and never found it again.

I was right, it's exactly as wonderful as I remembered. Your talent at writing h/Hr amazes me. Take that, JK.

hugs and flowers,
Madelaine
 

Pinkittan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/06
I liked it! It was hot and realistic, Hermione and Harry didn't seem out of character at all. I do hope you continue! It'll be more of an enjoyable read if you do!
 

Alyssa
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/09/06
This is a wonderful story. I love the maturity and acceptance from the characters. It was written beautifully, and I cannot wait to see what you come with next.
Also I love your response to the flame. It was civilized and mature, and I completely agree. Great job all around!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/08/06
not God Hermione or God HArry it's Merlin Hermione, Melin Harry And Rowling better make harry & hermione happen in book 7 or i swear i'll never buy any of her books again!!!!! HARRY & HERMIONE FOREVER!!!! It's only right.
 

Denial Twist
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 02/07/06
Ooh, wow. This is really, really good -- normally, most H/Hr smut I've seen (so far, anyways) turns out to be poorly written, and has the both of them completely out of character. Here, however, you portray them perfectly, even if I did, admittedly, only skim a bit of the more smutty parts; they were still incredibly well-written, though, and I still enjoyed the parts I did throughly read. By all means, keep up the awesome work!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/05/06
Good story but you just LOVE that F word, don't you?

RUINS IT!
 

Jenna Kathleen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/04/06
I have never really read anything like this. I am totally nuts over it! And the song is amazing!
 

bongy14
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/01/06
It's people like that who really piss me off. They act all sensible and intelligent about their ship because ho, ho they're right! But really, it's not like they're bloody Eintein for shipping R/Hr. It was their choice at first, and none of us knew who would ultimately end up with the other until the second last book.
Anyway, your response was really level-headed and it's great to see that you're nice enough to spare them, haha.

Oh! And lovely story. I really like the simplicity (for lack of a better word) of it, but also how meaningful it was for the pair. I'm so glad to know there is more to come soon!
 

melodiacat
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/12/05
Interesting post. I think there are people out there that consider the books like the Bible; don't mess with it.

But, the beauty of writing a fanfic is that you write what you like. So go all out. Have fun with it.

 

melodiacat
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/12/05
Interesting post. I think there are people out there that consider the books like the Bible; don't mess with it.

But, the beauty of writing a fanfic is that you write what you like. So go all out. Have fun with it.

 

vulcanarcher
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/09/05
I honeslty don't get where the "I HATE RON!" people are in abundance. I mean, granted he's not my favorite character (I mean, Fred and George!), but I don't hate him. He's rather adorably oblivious (books 6 does not count for me, everyone was OOC there except for Dumbledore).
 

vulcanarcher
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
Sensual, bitterweet, panty wetting (excuse the language), and very very good. You got the bittersweet feeling through very well.
 

On3-ShoT
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 12/09/05
GOd! I can't believe someone could do that!
I have to say it was cruel... I'm an H/Hr fan from the beginning and I have to say I get hurt when people say H/Hr fans are delusional..
Well anyway, I admire you for standing strong! If i would have received that email, i wouldn't know how to react...

Write more! I love it! And I do wish that non H/Hr fan would stop reading H/Hr ships if they can't stand the idea! I mean, I love the idea of Harry and Hermione, but i don't hate other ships... i do read G/H.. Hr/r.. Hr/D.. i mean, these are only fanfictions for pit's sake!
And to whoever sent you that email, i have to say this: GET A LIFE!

Go Girl!
 

JGC
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/05
That was such an awesome fic. It was just what we H/Hr shippers needed after HBP. Write more!!
 

plumgirl
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/08/05
I enjoyed this ficlet... I agree about HHr shippers not all being ron-haters... I like Ron too...
 

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