Enjoyable beginning. Uses Harry's feelings from book five nicely making Harry go nuts after Hermione's injured.

I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story. But I love it so. Your use of Multiple First Person POV is brilliant. I've not read anything like that here. It took some getting used to but after a couple chapters I got used to it.

GET THEM MARRIED! Haha. I liked the story. Very nice, easy, light reading (and since I've been reading 15+ chapter stories, I probably needed it). It was nicely thought out, and a very enjoyable read.

That was a pretty big clue you left there. Lavender, you would have never thought heehee.great so far.

Hi just going through all the novel length stories here on Portkey to find the one's I've liked to add them to my favourites list, so next time I feel like reading an Ol favourite novel length H/Hr I don't have to go searching. Your story has made my list.

Thankyou for writing it and posting it here on Portkey.

I love this part. So sad and romantic. Keep it up

you might not have noticed, but nagini was a female snake in canon. you referred to her as a him.

That story was soooo sad, but so sweet...i think that u should do a sequel...maybe make it about how Hermione and jarry get married and she gets pregnant...then u could do how ginny dates neville or sumfin

Nice story, it was cute and loved how everyone reacted to Ron and everything, it was great!

Interesting beginning, I wonder how it's going to continue. I hope Hermione and Harry will be together by the end.

Such a beautiful story! I love your writing and hope to read more in the future....

Ugh. I don't hate Ron - he's a great guy, except when some Harmonian fic writers get their hands on him But...he really should get his act together and do something about Hermione....

HAH! Well. I'm not sure I blame Ron for wanting to move on - though I might consider it a sign of him not truly loving Hermione...

Shudder. Hermione Jane Weasley. Shudder.

Ughs. Three years. Wow. *mourn* *anguish*

“Besides he’s not my type. His hair isn’t bushy enough.”

*blink* ... BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!!! That's an awesome line!

Overall, this was a good story. I liked that it was Vane. I could have sworn it was Lavender, but then again, you probably wanted us to think that. The switching of point of views was somewhat... well, actually very... distracting and hard to follow. I do love Crookshanks in this fic, though.

Meggs