I have just realised that this story is quite old and that you hadn't updated since. I truly hope you will someday, this is really good work, even if it's a bit childish but for being a story you wrote when you were 12, it's well written and nice planned. Again, i hope you continue

Wow! I know i said before that fourth chapter was the best but this waaaay better! The first part was really cute, the one from the middle was great and the last part was the best! Cheers, keep it up!

Wow, now i'm intrigued! That was really good! Best chapter so far! I only wonder if parvati really likes harry and if so, would she try to set him apart from hermione?

Ok, that was a nice chapter, not as exciting as the previous ones but i like this new teacher. Cool!

Hey, that was even better! Not crappy at all, you should take a look to the other good reviews and you'll see i'm not the only one who thinks this is great! Anyway, keep it that way!

That was brilliant for a first chapter! Love your plot and characters, i'll just keep reading and review more!

It is my suspicion that this will never be read. Just in case I feel impelled to go to it.
I have read this far tonight and I was afraid it wasn't going to come to an end. I was right. What I need to know is: "Is there going to be more?" If some of the writing was done when you were 12-13, you were a very precocious writer!
As a long-time advisor of writers, I would first suggest that you write a lot. Write about nice people and jerks. Write about things you like and things you hate. Develop a thick skin toward the complaints and criticisms reviewers level at you. Make lots of mistakes; you will continue but they'll become more rare and more exotic with time. Especially have a trusted editor (I guess you call them betas) to catch the errors of spelling and omission of words you seem now to do. Do NOT rely exclusively on your spell-check to catch them all; many of the simplest words are spelled differently with a different meaning but the same sound. The hardest of all activities to do successfully is to proof read your own work.
I would like to read more of this piece if you ever come back to it.
Thanks, Old Chuck

it was a good story very suspensfull very good job i liked it.

Can't wait to read more of your great story! rOckiN'~!

hey!

i'm just leaving a little note saying i'll be waiting for the next update. i believe there are still people waiting until you pick back up with this fic. i am grateful that you put this fic as paused...or else i would be getting upset pretty quickly. but anyway, readers are still here waiting to read what happens....i mean - there's a pretty awesome cliffy here that i would like to see resolved and you know, of course hhr fluff is awesome to read especially since they've sort of gotten back together - tentatively making that a solid thing again....LOVE this fic. the first got me interested this last chapter has me totally stuck on wanting you to finish this so good luck with these last few weeks of school/university(for me anyway) and lets see an update in the next month or so ok?! great

melissa
acoustics1220

nice story. keep it goin' its great! you should really add more to it!

I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE IF THATS IN ANYWAY POSSIBLE THANK YOU .

HEY?! its been 4 months almost. could you finish the fic please? yes, school is important but come on! i've been hanging around WAITING for the next chapter. I'm glad hermione and harry worked out what went wrong ...stupid patil. anyway, please! finish! please! and what about twisted logic too huh? you have some great fics but they could be greater if they were f-i-n-i-s-h-e-d. I wouldn't be grilling you if I didn't believe in your work. I think you have a very wonderful talent - there are always things to do better but that progression doesn't happen unless you're working on it.
please - write on
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com
melissa

i like this story so much is awesome and i can't wait for more.

wyou cant do that i knoe that was really smoth thing to do so we will be waiting 4 the next chapter but comoe on hurry cause the cookie monster its killing me ohhh and i so loved the hole harry and mione bethroom scenes they were great hope to see more in the future