u never got them together...i know it wud hav been difficult if not impossible in just one chapter seeing how u startd of, but plz update!!

*sigh* how cute! i love this story, sorry you didnt win the felix thing, but i still love this story!!

Callie

Wow, is that the whole story?

Okay.

Good.

It's good that it's short. Long stories take too long to read.

That was really cute. Very nice, but kinda over-dramatic on the dead eyes thing. I don't think you created the atmosphere enough for that. It's still good though.

~~Akumako_Ronso

Sweet one!! Could have had a few more details but was okay. The conversation in particular rocked.

'tis very good...whew...loved it...

why s Ron such a git sometms...eehehehe...

but really good...

That was beautiful. I love it. Everything H/Hr that I read at Portkey helps me w/ coping w/ the fact that Harry and Ginny got together and then splitup and that Hermione was jealous of Lavender.

That's so sweet. 'wipes tear'. you're now one of my favorite authors. HHr

Doesnt deal with gin but other then that perfect little piece.

aww... thats so sweet but - not to impose it seems like it should go on - i think some more smut can be squeezed from this cute little fic i hope you go on with it! good luck

Nice! This is especially reminiscent of an old interview JKR did before she went schizo: “Good. I don't think I could do all this without you. I… I need you badly…” He trailed off, softly.
If I recall, it was "Harry needs Hermione badly." Guess not anymore, though, right? [sorry for the bitterness... I should get over myself.]

Anyway, this is one of those little scenes that would have been nice to see in HBP, but might've gotten snipped in the editing. *sigh*

Animagus-Steph

awww! I love it! I love it! and I know we're in dark times...but reading this makes me feel so *sigh* Harry and Hermione 4 ever!!

great fic!

good job, i always thought that ron and hermione would butt heads too much to make it work as a couple, but they work great as pals.

I like this story, it shows promise for Harry and Hermoine, it is definately good, you shoud keep the story going.

Yay! *warm and fuzzy* Thanks for writing this, it's quite good. You've highlighted a few things that make HHr so right. Harry and Hermione really care about and need each other, and you've done a good job of bringing that out here.