...Wow *_* Simply...Magical I registered just to add this story to my favorites XD

Well, it appears my earlier assessment wasn't flattering enough, because this story is now in my top five all-time favorites. I have been lucky enough lately to come across some of the best Harry Potter stories ever written, when I was beginning to think I'd already read the best ones.

The writing and characterization were better than we were given in canon, especially in books six and seven, and the story was so well thought-out, Rowling should have stolen your plot and story instead of some of the inane plot devices she used.

Your description of the Horcrux creation process is so cool I'm wondering why a few dozen others didn't think of it before. The way Harry absorbs the loosed Horcruxes, and probably ten other very original plot lines came together to make this a very enjoyable, eciting and nerve-wracking read.

The way you wrote the internal dialogue for both and Hermione was beyond good. Very few people can write scenes involving sex without being either too clinical or too graphic, and you wrote this with so much feeling beyond the physical that no one should think this Hermione is suited for anyone but this Harry. And for good measure, you had a likeable and loyal Ron!

Oh, and the humor was great as well. Not over-the-top, prank-filled humor, although that certainly has its place, but dry, wry humor and lots of one-liners delivered with ease.

Thanks again!!

I was going to wait until I'd read the entire story before leaving a review, but the action and suspense you wrote into this chapter was just too much and I had to go ahead now.

Very exciting, and I must say that all the folks claiming this to be a great story are most definitely correct. I'd have to say this is now in my top ten HP stories ever, and might be in my top five HHr of all time.

Here's hoping the remaining chapters are of the same quality and CREATIVITY of those I've had the pleasure of reading so far.

Thanks again.

Absoulutely wondeful story!! I have been glued to the screen for the last couple of days trying to finish this before I have to work tomorrow night. I dare to say that J.K herself would be proud that her story helped you create this.

“You finally brought me with you so that I could kill you?” Harry asked brokenly.

The word brought does not work in this sentence as in so many other Americanisms, in this sentence the word took is the correct word to use as brought is present tense where took is past tense. You really should try just a tad harder with real English because your stories are good and the writing also good. Try not to let your Americanisms spoil your work and remember that only a very small percentage of the worlds population is American and a very large percentage who speak English as a second language have difficulties with the bad American English.

Hehe, I loved the Snape/Potter interaction. And Remus was hilarious! I'm pretty sure I read that part at least 4 times.


“That's not fair,” Harry said. “He'll be way ruder to you than I could possibly be to Hermione. Let it be Ron.”

*Snorts* I'm suprised Ron didn't say anything about that, but it seemed he was the only one who was even remotely happy at the table, so it probably didn't bother him too much. This chapter has to be my favorite, so far. I can't wait to read the rest.

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Very original, The Animagus form of Harry is one I haven't read before.

This chapter is UN-effing-BELIEVABLE!!! Whoa! What a rush. Never seen anything like it. JKR could take a lesson from you. To work this one out, I had to pay very close attention the the amount of detail you put into it. WELL DONE!

This is a marvellous chapter. The Dumbledore card was a stroke of genius.