That was so cute! If only JKR saw things the way you do *sigh* hehe. That's ok though, I think Harry and Hermione work better as adult lovers than childhood sweethearts. I hope you will consider writing more multi-chapter fics in the future, I loved this one!

a very very very very very very tiring, exhausting read!

Argh. I really want to read this story, but I can't stand this particular POV narration.

Oh, well, I guess I'll just go read one your other yummy fics.

Squee. That rocked. Needless to say that rocked.:3
Anyone else think that it resembled the old WB show Dawson's Creek a little?

I really loved it!
It was really funny, and the fact that you put a lot of things in spanish made me happy, yes, I'm a latin girl, CHILE! ^^ (God, how I love and miss my country.. now im living in Israel.. very far.. ¬¬)
The thing is that congratulations, this was a great fic! I really didn't like that Harry was so depressed about Ginny's death.. I hate her a lot, I'll hate her even more if she ends up with Harry ¬¬
Well..
It was beatiful also.. So.. Bye!
I fell in love with your fics..
Diamons or Pearls?
God! That was funny!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Although the second person thing threw me off for a bit (since most literature is written in either 1st or 3rd), it really helped me to emphasize with the characters. Their banter and all of the scenes where they interacted were very very cute and wrought deliciously with sexual tension. =9

I loved your characterization of Ron, he is outrageous and hilarious what with his drunken schemes and audacity.

The only part I didn't like was about Ginny and Charlie. You seem to allude to both their deaths but also some sort of torrid scandal between them... I figure you were going for some ambiguous way of killing her off, but that part was a bit unsettling.

Overall I loved this story though

i really liked this fan fic even though it was hard to tell who "you" is at times.

Awesome fic. it was Rec'ed to me by a friend and it was well worth the read . . . I am SOOO glad that I got the read the finished product and didn't have to dangle from the cliffs between updates ^_^

'Mione

Aw, adorable. Those two are so cute with each other. Though I wish for an epilogue!

Delightful. And you even addressed the Ron factor. No pun intended. Ginny gone (dead? Run off with Charlie?)... I guess that was a viable way to deal with her. Even though, as it wasn't exactly important to the story, I found myself wanting to know more about what happened. Maybe it was clear and I just missed something.

Nicely done, funny, and very romantic. Bravo and thanks for a great read.

That was amazing !! and I just found out that my grandmother died and i had to do something otherwise i was going to go insane and i read this and it made me feel better cause I escaped in to another world !!! Thanx !!

Fantastic job! I really enjoy your writing! It's very well written1!^^ Please update soon!! I cannot wait till the next chapter!=D Honestly, i really do like this Fan fic. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! ASAP!!!! PLEASE!! Okay great fan fic! AWESOME JOB! UPDATE!!!

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