That was exceptionally written. No nonsensical angst or OOC crap. Just pure awesome. Loved the tension, the connection, and most of all the end result! Keep it up and I'll keep reading.

I've been putting reading this fanfiction for a while now, about 11 months to be exact. Fortunately, its nothing to do with you, I'm just not into the whole first person pronoun. BUT tonight I took a shot at reading it, dared to be different. And as all things that you never expect, it is one of the best stories I've ever read. Can I just say, "Wow." Everything is simply spot on. Harry and Hermione are exactly in that moment, being who they are. I regret not reading it sooner but I'm glad beyond nargles that I have now.

I've been putting reading this fanfiction for a while now, about 11 months to be exact. Fortunately, its nothing to do with you, I'm just not into the whole first person pronoun. BUT tonight I took a shot at reading it, dared to be different. And as all things that you never expect, it is one of the best stories I've ever read. Can I just say, "Wow." Everything is simply spot on. Harry and Hermione are exactly in that moment, being who they are. I regret not reading it sooner but I'm glad beyond nargles that I have now.

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

Thank god thats over. Lol Im kidding it was wonderful, I loved ron by the way, but I feel you can't help but love him when every thing he does wrong can end up being so right. You are really good at writing the romance and love-making scenes, they are very awwwww-inspiring lol good job!

Those acts of omission (or "accidents") would never hold up in court. They would both get life in prison for the amount of intention (or should i say tension) that is being displayed by both of them. I love the game of cat and mouse they have going on it really is a battle of the sexes. Great story, moving onto the next chapter!

Oh, pure hilarity! That was great and I love the way you write in first person (at least I think it's first person lol ) it makes it a bit different to other fics anyhow, good job so far!

sorry for pointless review just want this back on my favourites list.

Because prancing around half-naked is the epitome of discretion... literally LOL'd

What if one day I come home to find you "unconscious on the floor? I’d kill you!" ah, isn't that always the threat? lol

I know I've already reviewed this, but I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed re-reading it again. Seriously, you saved me from an hour of tedium at work. Have a cookie

Seriously that was amazing, I have no words to describe how much I love this fic, seriously, you did such a good job, I'm all for Marias and valentinos, and I love the way you put it on a fic. Oh and I keep thinking who Elisa is, and I seriously can't ocme up with a name. Anyway, Congrats for being such a good writter.

I just wanted you to know that i love this story, just found it! And the most important part: you mentioned Roswell. Kindred spirits i tell you! Great work and I hope you continue writing in the future!

that was a fantastic storie...there is romance and humor oh so funny!
now if you excuse me Im going to check out your other stuff
see ya

he he he. ron's dead isn't he? *snicker* Oooh goodie. fear the wrath of a pissed Hermione! lol
good story.

This was a fantastic story. Believable, well-written, and dare I say, a little steamy?

Believe it or not, I've always rooted for the Maria and Valentino's as well Great job!