hmmm, i think it needs, more if you get my drift. But nevertheless it was pretty good.

...AWW THAT WAS FANTASTIC! I think you should continue this story! I really enjoyed it... but I loved how you portrayed the two, and Sirius. Lovely and pefect. Beautiful!

This is a nice quiet moment between two old friend, and I think that it can lead into a longer story.

It makes me think of beginnings, very sweet.

very well written, although you left us wanting.... haha good job... - keep up your writting

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

Very romantic. This is how H/Hr should be written. Could you please continue the story?
It has turned out really well upto now.

Very nice story. Just a sweet, simple talk between Harry and Hermone. I love these kinds of stories. It definitely made me smile. The memory was sweet; good to know Sirius could see the feelings between Harry and Hermione. And the beginning, where she just knew right away what he was doing, was a true testament to their unfathomably deep friendship. Great job!

Not a bad story, really. Little bit of OOC dialog but I really like that you brought Harry and Sirius back together. I was very disappointed that Rowling didn't have Sirius in book six at all... but then again, there were quite a few disappointing things in book six... I really like the Dog Star part of this story, it seemed like something that he would do and, more importantly, something that Hermione would mention to him. Good job.

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There should be more. I think you should write more. But as a one-shot this is still very, very awesome. I'm reading all the H/Hr I can to make me feel better, and this made me feel better. ^_^

good story. but just so you know, Sirius is a winter star. I know Harry's on the north hemisphere so he wouldn't be able to see the star till like November.

Nice. I liked the subtlety of it. I liked the conversation between Harry and Sirious. I don't know about anyone else but what I kinda got from HBP was that this was what Harry had reasoned to himself (dream or or not) to get over Sirious, he needed to stop moping around and get on with it. Sometimes it takes a large loss in life to make you realise that you still have yours, I speak from experience.

Being both Harmony and Orange Crush it didn't bother me too much, but I understand that people here are annoyed with the events of HPB, however I don't think that Sirius would forget Ginny's name let alone blow her off as 'that Weasley girl' being distant relatives and all and spending a lot of time in Grimmauld Place together. Lets at least try and be 'realistic' here.

Rhiannon.

I like how you wrote this. What was between Harry and Hermione in this story was only a beginning, but it is the beginning of something wonderful. And I'm glad someone has gotten around to explaining why Harry's grief over Sirius seem to go away a little quickly.

Started alright. I'll read the next chapter. Ron was never my favorite charecter. Even if Harry ends with Ginny in the book, which I dread. Hermoine and Ron are a horrible couple. Think I might not even read it just audio book it or skim it.

That was great,amazing,fantastic,wow.The whole story was great,the part about Harry telling Hermione the dream was very sweet and their talk in the end was great.Thank you sooooo much for sharing this with us and you did a great job