Aww, that was so sweet! I loved that Hermione was not at all out of character. Some people sometimes try to do a fic from Hermione's POV, and then completely ruin it by making Hermione too OOC. But you did a very nice job!

However long that may be. I’m patient. Until I’m 30.

Shotgun wedding or no shotgun wedding, I will be married by then.

haha very cute

hahaha! that was absolutely fabulous! and sooooo sweet! shotugn wedding or not! great line! very cute ficlet!

Nicely done. I like how you took a good amount of the R/Hr reasons and plausibly refused them, and for having Ron take in the whole situation like an adult. I also like the simplicity of it, the simplicity of Harry/Hermione, it's very nicely written because of the simplicity. Sorry I'm rambling, this is my bedtime story

Let's hope this will come to pass in JKR's world. But if it didn't, who cares, we have Portkey, right?

Brilliant perspective on Hermione and Harry's constantly evolving relationship. I really loved the narrative, and it seems to be very realistic. I found it interesting how many of your ideas are used repeatedly in every story -- it makes it seem like they're different chapters in a book. Well done!

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

I liked this! I think the pace was just fine--not the heated-let's-snog-now-ask-questions-later kind of relationship that they have at the Good Ship, or with Orange Crush for that matter. Harry and Hermione are metered out, they're like a lazy river that runs deep. I think you captured that well.
And, you hit on something that I've believed for a long time is an indicator that H/Hr is the better of the ships: Crookshanks' acceptance of Harry. Though I think 'adore' was a strong word, I think that you hit the nail on the head, Crookshanks approves of Harry--and since Mione hasn't an older brother, he will have to do.
There was something else--but I can't remember. Anyway, thanks for your entry, I enjoyed it.
Animagus-Steph

I liked it. Very good job. I dont nrmally like POV stories, but you made this work. I'd lave to see a sequel sometime soon. I'm giving you a good rating in the competition. Good luck!

Sirena

That was really cute and very sweet. It's okay that it's a little slow paced, but love doesn't always happen at first glance. It takes time and nurturing. Well done, well done.

~~Akumako_Ronso

NICE u know this is exactly how i think this series should end, and it's not so nrealistic, it seems very true, considering how eevrything is going. sigh this was sooooooo good i loved it!

It was not dull and slow-paced. It was lovely and made me smile. Aww, I love the little insecurities Harry had and how Hermione could bring him out of his funks. It was so sweet when she said that she'd never leave him. So touching. Loverly!

aww...that was so sweet. i loved it! it made me cry! go h/hr! we still have faith in you! om..great great great story! muah!

This was a very good story. And very plausable which made me enjoy it even more. Great job.

This was poignant. A very nice epilogue for HP. I enjoy that it's from Hermione's point of view. Well done.