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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/05/06
this is great

it's the first one that doesn't have ne tantrums thrown and gives you a positive outlook at all of them so thanks for making my day
Author Feedback: You're very welcome. Thank you for reviewing!
 

w.y.back
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/06
I read this a while back and wasn't able to review. Today I thought I'd finally rectify that. This story is beautiful in that it just feels right somehow. It's not overdone, everyone's precisely in-character, the canon pairings are there, there's no fluff or betrayal of any kind, and Harry and Hermione seem to be faithful and caring spouses to Ginny and Ron, and yet it's absolutely H/Hr! This could easily be an epilogue to the HP books. You've done an excellent job of reconciling canon with higher truth. Bravo!
Author Feedback: Thank you so much! Yes, this was my attempt to have my H/Hr and my canon too. Because, durn burn it, I didn't imagine all those H/Hr moments in the first five books... events in the sixth book notwithstanding. I'm very pleased I could convey the right feeling here for you. Be well...
 

livingArtemis
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/06
I love this. I like how Ginny's not jealous, but understands it. Normally, I don't like fics that have Hermione and Harry married to the Weasleys, but I loved this one. And how Ron is clueless. LOL. Awesome job!
Author Feedback: Thank you! I just wanted to show one scenario where, even though Harry and Hermione were married to the Weasleys, the bond they shared wasn't broken. If anything, it was stronger than ever.

That's my story, and I'm sticking to it.

Take care, and thank you again.
 

livingArtemis
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/06
I love this. I like how Ginny's not jealous, but understands it. Normally, I don't like fics that have Hermione and Harry married to the Weasleys, but I loved this one. And how Ron is clueless. LOL. Awesome job!
 

HermioneIstheOne
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/06
I remember this story strangely comforted and healed me great deal after the shock and disappointment and even hatred from reading HBP. But I couldn't remember the story name and author. Whenever I had time, I tried to search this story among numorous post HBP pics but used to fail and felt moody. So you know how happy I am now that I at last found this story again. I think I'll remember your authour name and the storyname like my own name from now on hehe. And after rereading it, I don't think I had wasted my time at all.
Author Feedback: Words are inadequate to show you how much I appreciate this, but they're all I have. Thank you very much indeed. I'm glad you enjoyed this drabble, both back in July and today. And spending time with friends is never wasted.

Be ever well, and thank you again.
 

Evernight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/03/06
I read this story last year but it seems I forgot to review it. I remember it gave me some comfort back then, and for that I want to thank you...
I also want to add that I'm looking forward to read more of your work, so please, write more...
Author Feedback: It gave me comfort to be able to post it when I did. I'm glad you found it so as well.

Thank you so much for your kind words. And rest assured, I will write more, as time and RL allow. The next chapter of Restoring Hope is about halfway done...

Take care. -- Paracelsus.
 

eydryth
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/01/06
I never tire of reading this story. I read it everytime I remember what transpired in HBP and I get a bit sad. This story reminds me that no matter - H/Hr had that deeper connection, one that mere mortals long for...

I read it a while back, but not sure if I left a review. This is one of my favorites post-HBP. Yes, despite H/G. It also made me read your other fics, and I must say I am glad I did. You are quite a writer. Thank you for sharing your gift.


Author Feedback: Well, thank you! I hadn't expected this little piece to engender the response it has... but I think it's touched a chord. A reminder that, no matter what Book 7 may bring, Harry and Hermione have already proven their bond -- a bond that won't break.

I greatly appreciate your kind words, eydryth. Thank you again.
 

skyace
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/05
MMMm.. Argh. I assume you wrote this fic to show the stronger bond between Harry and Hermione in response to the Harry/Ginny and Hermione/Ron ships. My only problem is that Ginny apparently thinks it's "okay" to keep Harry to herself when she KNOWS that Hermione comes first in Harry's life and vice versa.
Author Feedback: Hi! Yeah, this was, in a way, a response to other ships... because, darnit, we didn't imagine all those Harry/Hermione signs in the first five books. They were there, they were real. Harry and Hermione *do* share a bond, one that won't break just because they happen to be married to other people.

Ginny... well, she knows she *doesn't* have Harry "to herself". She has to share him, or lose him entirely. And in this story, she's okay with that.
 

DeliverMeFromEve
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/05
Ah, I never realized I could enjoy a fic where Harry and Ginny are married! I'm glad I read this. I'm so glad you wrote it. Thanks for having the creativity and courage. It's done many of us good.
Author Feedback: My pleasure. Yes, even if married to someone else, Harry's bond with Hermione is too strong and deep to ever break. No matter what.

Hope your Christmas is merry.... Thanks very much for writing.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/12/05
Great work, you've got her!

This piece of fiction restored my faith in that deeper love, too. I guess, if it ends this way, it's all right then.
Author Feedback: I'd take it.... Thanks for letting me know!
 

DiezeL
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/05
That was a magnificent piece. Not overbearingly fluffy to the eye. I wonder why I've never read any of your works before but you've clearly made a fan out of me.

Fantastic job! I'm looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your works.
Author Feedback: Thank you! It seemed appropriate when I posted it here. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Take care.
 

Ahyanah
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
Yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.................................................................This I like, This excellent. And you are right, a few mouths ago if I read this I would go like "Man, you crazy". But now, it's the best alternative route I've seen for Pumkin Pie after I finished the Book that should not be named.
Author Feedback: Glad you agree! Well, if HBP is the way things are to be in canon, I will still maintain that Harry and Hermione share a bond that won't die. And I'm not alone in this, erm, delusion.

Thanks for reviewing.... - Paracelsus.
 

Ahyanah
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
Yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.................................................................This I like, This excellent. And you are right, a few mouths ago if I read this I would go like "Man, you crazy". But now, it's the best alternative route I've seen for Pumkin Pie after I finished the Book that should not be named.
 

MyForeverHarry
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/09/05
I had read this story a while back but forgot to leave a review. I also read the reviews by others posted here and I totally agree with all of them. I suffer a major heartache because of HBP. Though I still hope that JKR is not literary blind and would redeem herself in Book 7. I think maybe she just wants to get all the meaningless relationships for Harry out of the way first (Cho, Ginny), through which Harry learns and matures, so that he could come together with Hermione without any third party interference in Book 7. I hope.

For me though, this story, along with several other stories in this site, has left a very deep impression in my psyche.

You don't know me, but I thank you all the same because your ability to write has changed me.

Your story (which, by the way, really is very fitting/descriptive/definitive of H/Hr), has ended for me a two-year funk caused by a shattered life.

Your story restores to me the belief in a deeper love; that it exists, even if I may never find it in this universe, in this lifetime.

Two years I was in a limbo, lost, adrift in a life without hope. But my heart heals after reading this story (and some others in this site, including Taste). Because this story make me realise the kind of love I want; and the love that I had lost was not it. That realisation heals me. I have lost someone, but now I realise he was not my 'Harry'. That makes me okay.

Thank you. A million.
Author Feedback: This is... wow. This is humbling. To allow my words to enter your life to that degree, to rekindle hope where it had faded -- if I could do that for you, then I'm deeply, honestly grateful for being able to do it. I thank *you*, my unknown friend, and I'm very glad you're okay.

For there are many kinds and levels of love, and lucky is the one who finds them all. For I firmly believe this: that we are brought into this world at all so that we may experience love.

I hope you find your 'Harry'.

Be thou well, and ever well. -- Paracelsus.
 

brad
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/07/05
Okay, now this is important - is something wrong with Portkey's e-mail notification mechanism? Because I didn't get an e-mail that you'd published this, and I'm about to have a nervous breakdown thinking "what if I hadn't, on a pure whim, gone to visit Paracelsus's profile page?". I need to read all the good H/Hr fiction I can get, I can't afford to miss any!

I liked the story. There's so much detail accorded to the Hermione character in the canon (and so little detail given to Ginny in comparison) and it's nice to see the old "two halves of one soul" thing summarised so well here. Their picking up each other's words, the butter dish, the cloak - very comforting to read (especially after the last two weeks!).

The bit about the wedding photograph is one of those twists that distinguishes a 'quality' story/author from a run-of-the-mill one. So clever - I would have never thought of it - yet it fits right into the JKR universe. A wonderful, second way to illustrate the feelings that are running just under the surface but which no-one dares to mention out loud.

Two dominant feelings after reading this -

a. Would the 'real' Ginny be so accommodating, so sharing of the husband she "loves dearly"? This is where I get mixed up with 'fandom Ginny' and the one from canon; even after HBP we don't know much about her at all.

b. It's so *sad* that it has to be this way to get H/Hr rolling from what we read in the sixth book! I mean, I prefer the H/Hr pairing, but I don't dislike Ginny or Ron ... but there's really no way out of having one or more of them unhappy (or dead!) for we selfish H/Hr people to get our way, is there? Dead Weasleys, evil Weasleys, or just unhappy/unloved/secondary Weasleys. In these early days of post-HBP recovery I'm still too soft to face without a qualm that which must be done for the 'ship to survive ...

Thank you for the story! A nice 'warm' little read, although still a bit ... depressing ... too.
Author Feedback: Hi, brad! Sorry you weren't notified about of the story -- I don't know why, never having used Portkey's notification process myself, but you might bring it to their attention.

I'm glad you liked the story, even if it was a bit depressing... but it's depressing only because the whole post-HPB scene is depressing. Sigh. And yes, it's sad that, thanks to Book 6 and the Infamous Interview, Ron and Ginny must be made unhappy for Harry and Hermione to be together. I wouldn't have wanted that -- I rather like Ron and Ginny.

As for the 'real' Ginny... we still don't know her, do we? It's been six books, and we *still* don't know if she's the jealous type, or the sharing type, or whatever. We've seen precious few clues... but we know that she showed no glee in GoF when she learned that Harry struck out with Cho. And she seemed to understand when Harry broke up with her at the end of HBP. She might well accept the scenario described here, if that's what it took: better some of Harry than none of him.

Chin up. I'm really not sanguine about Book 7 anymore, but we have all the fanfiction we could want.

Thanks for your thoughts -- Paracelsus.
 

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