Nice story, but the ending is kinda rushed, doesn't give too much closure, but i guess that makes it kinda unique, all in i enjoyed it

love the story. But why did you have to take ron out of thi picture? but besides ron dieing i really liked it.

This was one of the very first stories I ever read on portkey and I just wanted to say how much I loved it, even if it is about 2 years too late. I wish you and Kaze were still writing but I\'m thankful for the wonderful stories we have from you!

I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u

Heya. Just thought I'd write a quick comment. I loved this story. Which given its bitter sweet ending with probably more bitter than sweet is a bit strange. The writing is of a depth and maturity very seldom reached, the characters are so amazingly developed. Harry and Hermione are both so stubborn and the relationship was never going to be straightforward but that didn't stop it being right and you got this across so well. Its a shame Ron had to die but I guess thats part of the essence of the story. Like you said full of emotion and impact. You did them all more than justice.

Wow...I just read this fic in like, 6 straight hours. I have to say, it is hands down the best fic I have ever read, even better than Jori's work, or Lorien's--amazing. Thank you so much for giving it to us.

I simply adored this story. And was so completely sad to see it end. It was so beautifully written and the plot was extremely realistic and imaginable in the world of Harry Potter. The love Harry/Hermione shared was so raw and real, and makes me want something similar, minus the war aspect. Please keep up the fabulous work, and get cracking on your next masterpiece! Lol, loved it!

*sobs* Oh wow that was....awful. I mean that as a compliment! Your chapter wasn't awful but the emotion in it made me feel awful. lol. If that makes any sense at all....great job!

Wow. I think my heart just about had a heart attack when I thought he was "getting rid of her". Whew. Fantastic chapter, fantastic story.

Every time he sent one flying through the air, his body rumbled with his chuckles.

“That’s really quite disturbing,” Ron said in her ear..."

I know its the wrong chapter, but after reading the whole thing, and oddly enough, not crying over Ron's death. That line made me shoot pop-rocks out my nose. And I can tell you, if you think that line is funny, you should really have seen me madly trying to blow the popping little boogers out of my head. It felt very much like a bat-bogey hex.

Thank You for this wonderful fic, even if it was completed long ago..

Oh my god! This story is amazing! I have been trying to find a good story to read for ages and I then I finally found this one! You really capture the emotional side of the characters and I really felt included in the story. The characters also were exactly like they were in the books and I felt like I was reading a story by JKR. (except she doesn't go for H/Hr the bum!) But anyway, thanks for writing the most amazing story ever! Great job!

Ginnie

This... words cannot describe this story. I read it over the course of a couple weeks and id be lying if i said i didn't love every minute of it. You should consider writing a whole book, and im not just saying that to be some stupid fanboy! Great job Goldy!

i really liked this story...it was really emotional and i can't wait to read your other stuff...thanks soo much for writing it and yes i do think you did ron's death justice...and i think you portrayed ginny very well, always kind of stuck in the hero worship of harry thing...anyways thanks again

Excellent fic, sorry to see Ron die but i guess that happens in a war.

I would like to leave a review of something that was more than just 'This was an awesome fic ' but I can't seem to work up a proper response.

There were so many things that I liked about this fic and many more that made me sad for the trio and you were right that killing Ginny wouldn't have the same emotional impact as Ron's death does.

All in all, I adore this fic .