What a different ending that was. It was like you were using Sirius to represent your feelings towards JKR within the story itself. I enjoyed this story alot i'll be sure to read more of your works and review!

Definition of your story: A short but suprisingly well-written ficlet, that is easy to read, gets straight to the point and is anything other than "ordinary". ( I had to laugh at your definition of a JKR lol)

I'm with you on the Harry/Ginny thing. I personally think R/HR is the lesser of the two evils. I just think that they are wrong for each other (and always will think that). I like this chapter, its kind of a transitional chapter for harry where he works out what he really wants.

I like this story, and I like the fact that you get straight to the point on your plot.It kinda reminds me of how Luna get's straight to the point with her honesty lol

Quite a revelling first chapter. Quite starightforward, but nonetheless engaging.Hermione becomeing an Auror now that was a good twist.

I totally agree with you. Harry and Ginny? Urgh...she still thinks him as this hero and for some odd reason, I had never really liked her, especially after the Quidditch comment in HBP.
HHr all the way.

You must know you are not alone. How can we respect JKR when she has sucked us into this wonderful world and at her whim she plans on destroying it. YOU and other Fans MUST keep writing, your stories are Better. I need to see the "GROUP" grow up and Live. I just wish we could see the actors play the grown ups. Enough Sadness for Harry and ALL his friends.

The truth always hurts when it smacks you in the face. Good for Hermione. Harry needs a slap.

Its ok as long as Harry finds he can't live without Hermoine. I enjoy your stories

your right.
if HG ends up im gonna hafta smack someone.
hard.
like harry because that would be him going for the pretty atletic bitchy overly dramatic girls.
what kind of message does that send to people?
"okay girls in order for a boy to like you, you have to try to be rude and make fun of people, plays sports, be gorgeous all of a sudden, and treat his best friends that are girls like rubbish!"
harry needs some sense knocked into him, ginny obviously doesnt care if she let him go off to fight evil by himself. i could tolerate that relationship if she wouldnt have willingly let him break up with her.
hermione would have fought for it.
damn ginny.

You are my clone! I can not stand ginny! I hated the whole 6th book thing. I don't know what JKR was thinking too! I think that she is trying to relive the whole James and Lily thing. (Harry looks like James Ginny looks like Lily.)It's so stupid! I hated Ginny when in the second year she read that love poem to harry. "His Hair is as dark as a black bord?!" This girl buges me to no end Plus I hate bugs! Harry and Hermioe forever. The only good parts in the book are when Hermione attackes ron with the birds and that wonderful break up in the end. Goodbye Ginny and say hi to Hermione!-Padfoot

Yeah, I just read the delusional interview. Do you know that JKR laughs maniacally??!!!

That means she's like a maniac, right?

So that explains HBP!

I think you're great! Who needs JKR! We can create our own Harry potter world right here on portkey.

I loved this chapter it was great, ya I've lost all respect for JKR as a person also she knew H/Hr were going to read the interview she culd've at least contained her self not to put it down sooo hard ah well I guess I'm a little bit delusional when she was describing how ginny was perfect for harry in the third interview thingie I swear she was describing Hermione lol maybe I'm a lot delusional great story I'm glad that you're not giving up on H/Hr and Portkey it's helping me stay loyal to what I believe in too

YES! I agree totally with you if RHr end up even if I dont want them I cant stand HG because I hate Ginny. I dont trust her and as Ron would put it, shes too much of a "Scarlet" woman