AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH TOOOO CUTE, pelase update on this story its awesome. I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE, pease oh plea update update update

nicely ended. I think a bit more detail in their body language before anything serious begins in the bed might be good to add.
Otherwise: great story.

great first chapter. looking forward to reading the rest of the story

Great story!
Chapter one was fabolous, and I liked the beautifully quiet ending - there was no real need for a second chapter.
I do not wish to abuse the second chapter - it continues your dark and serious universe nicely. Just like music

A great first chapter! I always enjoy chapters that change a story in the last couple of sentances. Well Done!

I'm so happy that you've written a second part to this fic - it was always my favorite one-shot because it said everything so perfectly. This second part was so sweet and I think it's a beautiful companion to the first part.

“Harry,” she said as she drew near. “Jam?”
“Blackberry,” he replied promptly.
She grinned back. “Grape.”
“Impostor,” he accused, though Harry knew that neither of them need ask. Hermione would know him anywhere, and no one could fake the smile on her face so well.

I think that was my favorite part - I like how you've made the jam thing a sort of inside joke between them, and the way that they know each other without needing to hear the actual answer is so Harry/Hermione. Simple yet sweet part.

And now I'm off to read your other one-shots

You just may be my favorite Harry/Hermione author.

Happy writing!
-Chelime

Great! so beautifully written, so tantalizingly realistic and probable. you're going to make me want to read your stories more than canon!

A nice ending to a good story. There are some loose ends I wouldn't mind having tied up, but I'll have to be satisfied with what is already written, if you aren't planning more. Good writing.

I love the way it all came together, by the end of the chapter. The little bits of the conversation all mattered. And it's true, that Hermione is the only woman who will ever understand exactly what Harry's going through, what he has been through. Noone else, no matter how hard they try, will ever see the true and complete Harry.

omg that was fantastic. so caring and sweet it made me cry a bit. you have a clear talent for showing emotion. please don't stop I can't wait to read more even if it is another fic.

absolutely lovely and touching how they just slipped into each other. exactly how they shoudl be.

Loved it!

I really liked how you did the intimate part at the end. Nothing racie and was classy. Good job!

Exceptional story. I love how you've woven in the presumed plot from the seventh book. You shouldn't stop writing it. Follow the story through the final battle. I'm curious to know how you think it will turn out!

oh!that was it?I didn't know it was just sort of a one-shot fic.

I have to say that I didn't expect this to be so well written...no offense...and I love it.

Especially the next to last paragraph. Tres Bien!

Oh I loved this story! It was so sweet and I liked it that Harry didn't ask for permission like in every other story... Harmony is the best! hehe