AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/08
That was very odd  . Odd as in unique, like Luna lovegood. I liked it. It was rather symbolic and quite warm, which left me feeling oddly tingly inside. |
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MEUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/06/07
i lyk it, i really really do...it is different from every1 elses but dat wat makes it urs. |
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CainaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/06
Wow. This was incredible. You're a very gifted writer. I'm so glad I found this, and you. |
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wow...that was awesome...I really liked how you didn't ever use any of their names...It was awesome... |
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Wow I think that this one shot was brilliant. I really loved it. |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
This beautiful sadness... i was worried when i saw where you were going with this, but you managed to add some sugar but not too mutch :-)
I think the story could be good even ending before the door scene.
Bye |
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Awww, how sweet. Loved it, the hints of things just there. Well done. |
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PaisleyPiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/08/05
This is perfect. Just perfect. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep writing - this is your gift.
Truly well done. |
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Aww, how lovely. I was getting worried at the beginning; I thought maybe she had died. But then such a sweet, happy ending.  Aww, it was just so wonderful! Great job! |
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tonic2wSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/05
I liked that. I was a little leary when I stared but by the end was truely intrigued and happy with it. Great job and I look foward to whatever your next story might be.
I think the best part was how you brought it full circle. |
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AuliyaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/05
Wow, love this fic. Incredibly romantic and well-written - the length and the style make it seem almost like a free-verse poem rather than a short-story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. This one sort of came out of nowhere, so I'm glad it portrays well  |
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Awwwwwwww that was so sweet! I liked the way you decided to write it and it was a great story. Loved it! |
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Jillian84Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/07/05
Wonderful story! I really like your writing style; this story was very well written. They way that you wrote Harry's point of view is very interesting. Also, I really liked the lack of proper nouns. Great job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it  |
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I like your choice of using 2nd person. It worked very well. The story went by fast, and it felt sort of numb, but I think that feel suited it perfectly. I also like that you showed their bond through simply sharing a book. It's perfect for Hermione, and I imagine it became perfect for Harry. I can't wait for your next story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I was going for a bit of numbness, so I'm glad that played through... and of course, who doesn't love books?
Thanks for reading!!
LC |
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Wow, so much emotion! I loved it! I liked the poem or song that went along with it and I liked how you didn't name name's. Very good! |
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