Good story. I don't have much more to say then that, sorry. It really was a good story though!

A great ending to a great story! You did a really nice job with this story. Keep up the good work.

yeah, you must must must do a wedding scene! i loved your idea of the dream sequence. it was brilliantly written. great job, and i'll be keeping up w/ this story by chapter alerts!!!!

i really liked it! good job! i am not goin to give you a hard time for takin a long time to update b/c i completely understand! good job! they story is great and i really hope you do a epilogue or a sequel or something!

i really liked this one. I also really liked and so it goes so please continue both!
lol
please oh please?
melissa
acoustics1220

good he has to heal her i dont want to keep reading if she is going to die.

oh you better find a cure for her because it will make me very sad if she dies.

how i really like the way you started this but if hermonie dies i am goiog to be mad.

how i really like the way you started this but if hermonie dies i am goiog to be mad.

Hm.. bad. Very bad.
When, in my opinion, you're plotline follows paths similar to what you'res has done, then instead of the story moving forward on plot, it really should move ahead reflectively. A person is going to die; while i don't know whether you have, or have not, experianced the death of someone you know, you are unable to translate into the words, the thoughts and actions of the people involved. Especially, someone like Hermione. While some might say, that because she's extremely smart, she might except it more easily than others, i would follow the group that points out that Because she's much smarter than others, she knows that will lose out on a brilliant life, and the regreat, anger, pain, fleeting joy, ... everything assosiated with imminent death should be played out in a much more vivid manner.
this is not a small order, that's why i would, short of proffesional writting, look for stories which tend towards such emotional conflicts, and thus, i find you'res tedious. It seems the only reason that she had lukemia, is to ensure that harry comes out with his love for her. And that, mon ami, is no reason at all.

Ah wow what a battle over saving Hermoine. Highly enjoyed your tale.

They made it! Even though I was sure about it, there is always this little doubt playing tricks with the imagination - what if...
Actually, I think there is no need for an epilogue as the story stands for itself, but it would be a nice round-up of the history of Harry and Hermione happily ever after with tons of children ;-))))

All the best
Dominik

Great chapter, i'm so glad she is ok and that they are happy again

I can't wait for the next post and you did an amazing job with this story, i loved it and you are such a great writer, hope that you keep writing more ffcs and of course hope that you post the next chapter soon

Well done, great job

Thats so sweet!I'm so happy that shes better and that her and harry ar enow happy together!OMG PLEASE DO the epilouge!

Can't wait for the next update!! Sorry it took so long for me to read and review but my computer's been down as well!! Technology, eh!?!? Anyhoo, really good chapter - different which I like, You have a good imagination!! I hope they make it!! Please update soon!!