"He'd never claimed sanity. Insanity had claimed him years ago." I love that expression it's brilliant, and so James! if you know what I mean.
"I'm not sure I would've been able to give her up. After all, I've already met her" that is such a wonderful line, so romantic! Swoon worthy James there

ur cute buddy!this was kinda sweet...i like readin ur stuff...may ur wishes come true!

Hey, I've read this story like a million times, but I couldn't remember if I reviewed already. I think it's so freaking cute!!! I love it...

Very cute and adorable! As I said earlier... you write LJ so well!

*awkward mother in law moment*

I loved it! He-he. Ah, you can just expect a 'chat' like that coming into it somewhere. My NAN is almost like that. I'm too young to have totally gross chats, lol. I walk off as soon as she talks about guys.
Na, great story though

ha ha I thought it was cute. I don't think you messed up... because that would mean it has a flaw... and maybe it does if you want to publish it... But I Think it was BRILLIANT. *not saying you can't publish it... I'm jsut saying... you may need to prologue it*

ROTFL. i think that this should be called "a woman's rule" or something that was so hilarious! i can't imagine being married and then having my *mother-in-law* "dishing" details about her sex life (hey, at least lily's mother-in-law LIKES her! lol)

well, james must be a seer a *something* cuz he certainly *did* get a harry, lol (please tell me that he wasn't actually sleeping with "warm boxers" and all, though, lol)

Oh my gosh! That was soo cute! I love the conversations between James and Lily.

You write them both so perfectly. I've read some stories where they are completely out of character. My favourite part though was:

Remus nodded at the door handle. “Our James very smartly put up the `Do Not Disturb' sign.”


Sirius snorted. “That was Lily. James is too horny half the time to think of things like that.”

You're an amazing writer. xD

Why do I like this so much? No idea... But it is great! Love the way you write!

i agree women WILL rule the world one day!!! oh and the story was great

Very very good! I very much enjoyed it, and all though I am not an oldtimer, I will say that you can write fluff!

women would rule the world!!

true true! And no i dont think it ruined the story.. I mean it was just a little cute thing.. kind of like an Epilogue... And that would be very embarassing@
Good job love the story
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Kaci

hm... ok So i decided to read this one... I suppose it's ok and not to dirty.. he he he i dont usually read anything over PG13... for obvious reasons basicly since i'm ot old enough.. But i really like your writing style and i think your a fab writer.. I'm gonna addd u to my favorite authors so i can get notifieed when you write more! Good job@
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Kaci

I liked it..The second one-shot was hilarious! I cant wait to read more of your fics.