Woman, I absolutely love your stories and how you write them but you've got to stop keeping us hanging! *rips out hair* We're dying here! We wanna know what happens next! Please, please continue! Your stories are fantastic!

MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE! u haveee to write more please iam begging you please

Where in the bloody hell is the update!?!?!?!?! I just read this I don't even know when you posted this and know I'm extreamly mad!!!! This is, is I don't know what you want to call it but if you don't post the rest you will a very mad reader on your hands! Note; Not thearting I'll just be sad. ---tiger111991

please make a second chapter and so on..it's really good so far maybe you can make them a little longer with more detail.

well, I loved it. It's kinda original. I mean, ther ehave been stories where Harry gets himself a girlfriend other than sweet,darling,meant-to-be hermione...but not one where she tries to win him over and rumors emerging...usually it's just harry realizing his feelings bla bla bla...happily ever after.

Well, a bit sad chapter for hermione, I hope there would be an h/hr talk soon. This is a good chapter.

This is a really good story. I love how you protray Hermione's emotions. The whole jealous thing, yeah, those are the stories I like for some reason. They seem more deep to me, I suppose. Well, anyways, awesome job on this chapter and keep updated please

This is interesting so far! Hurry and update! I can't wait to see what happens next!

ok story but harry seems OOC, but still want to see what you are going to do with this story

Harry seems really OOC... he really has other things to be worrying about, instead of a girl... random girl at that.