That, was very nice writting i wish you had the battle scene though i can just see ron coming in and with a grin on his face saying ready to go save the world , i doubt you'll even read this review

just so you know, up until the end i really couldn't tell what was a dream and what wasn't (ok, after a while i COULD, but still!) i love how ron manages to be the "voice of reason" in both harry's dream AND in reality ("tell her, already!" and pretty much "let's go save the world, already!" lol)

My gosh - that was an AWESOME story. I luved it. So touching
Soo...all that was Harry head (cept the end) odd. lol.
Anyway, awesome

Is he still dreaming the last part or is that part for real??
man i cnt wait to actually read the next book where finally harry gets with hermione and harry finally kills Voldemort!!

Excellent! I love how youn ended this one! Very...emotional. It felt real, and intense!

Interesting example of how a teenager can be tortured by his dreams. Of course this is the serious case of a lad at war, but without these factors, teenagers the world over can be just as confused. Fine writing.

That was awesome. I loved that. Great job! I thought it was wonderful!

This entire story reminds me of the movie "Waking Life" but with much more evil and much less a chanve of me getting motion-sickness.

That means I like it.

After this voldemort does not stand a chance!
Having to come back to fulfill hs dreams would be a good reason to win
Bye

Lovely piece. I loved how you write your dreams -- they seem so realistic and believable. I can easily see Ron popping in at a most inopportune moment and changing the scene to the DADA classroom.

just like all your other works, i loved it, supurb piece of work, keep up the good work

I don’t know what to say. Which is quite surprising even to me seeing as I’m a chatterbox. I had no idea what to expect when I picked this fanfiction to read. Wow! Its just wow. I like it, great job.

Awww.... So sweet. I really like this story. Nice Job. Is there any more?

Oh, how intense. I like the way you made is dream float from one person to the next. Great job!

Wonderful job, as always, Frances. This is such a great idea - moving through Harry's vivid dreams from one obstacle to another that he himself has put in front of him. It's so true, all of it. He worries, he's scared, he's nervous, he's loyal, he's guilt-ridden. You did a wonderful job of dissecting all of that and getting to the real them - quietly accepting and dealing and mouthing the great pronouncement. That was perfect.

I miss you very much, and I hope your summer is going well. Your work continues to show how very ready you are to take on the world.

*hugs and kisses*

jane