its so sad that raven died
i have to say that giving
remus a love potion is rather
..well..extreme.
love potions are illegal in
the wizarding world
and to give him one could be
devastating
not to mention, most are
temporary
but, still, its a good idea
about the whole memory erasing thing
its an excellent idea
and that would lead to how peter
would betray them, but
um..wouldn't sirius, and the others
remind them about what they forgot?
i liked how james and lily got
back together, cuz they totally
didn't know why they broke up
and ...yea
great chapter!
keep posting,
and good luck with future stories
--Amara

Alright, it's ok. I've been busy with so much school work so I would understand why it's so late. I don't know your reason for it being late though. Good chapter! Update sooner if you can.

Fantastic story and awesome of them not remebering or else they wouldn't trust Wormtail on the location of their house. I was almost worry that you screwed up the story. Great JOB!

ok so reviewing again, because i have a question. I was on ur fic site thing and i read the story on the home page and i did not understand the end of it or it there more and i missed it some where else?

I love this story and it is all that i can think to say. hopefully that is enough encouragement to get you to update as soon as you can.

Funny chapter. Hilarous, i which was at hogwarts acamdey now and to be a witch. Wouldnt that be cool.

Good chapter and awesome on presenting that Lily had friends. In some of the lily and james, Lily doesn't have any friends. And excellent idea on having two school groups rivials.

I love your fanfic! It's so cute and it seems like what J.K. Rowling would want it to be.

awesum story!! love all da ships!! keep up da great work!!

I'm not sure that calling your readers "beotch"s is going to do much good to your review ratings, but that's just my opinion... You've got a good writing style; keep it up! I like the premise of the story.

Cute story! Love it. update it soon and when you do make the chapters longer but otherwise really cute

What I'm talking about is that at the end where your Author's Note is, you wrote, "REVIEW, BEOTCH!" And I just didn't like that you called us a name. That's all.

Is that any way to talk to a reviewer? Ugh! Maybe I just won't review, but it's too late now seeing as I'm writing(or rather typing)in the little box for giving reviews. I do like your story though. Please update soon!!

What does dhe mean by Milton and tutoring session? I'm still not over the scumbags, but you are an excellent writer.

It's super short. Why can't the healers at St. Mungos do better? They're going to forget all about the scumbag and act like it's a merry day. It's because of them that they're going to get killed. Still extremely good, though.