lol That was nice. I love the story telling. Fantastic job! Wonderful work!

Oh my lord I adore this fic, it's too sweet for words. Amazing author, you are. This tells the story things that we couldn't imagine. It was like watching a mini-movie inside my head while reading this. Wonderful, wonderful job. Keep up the good work.

lil_irish_girl

thank goodness i see a chapter two... i surely would have hexed you (had i been a character in the harry potter world) had you not continued... good good girl

that was hot harry and hermione i in the shower together nice man

you gotta take it to the next level it is hot !that be so cool harry completeing hermione -perfect

That was intersting. A fun way of telling and showing stories.

Mommy, that was abosuky amazing. You are such a terific writer! Kudos. I bow down to you!
Heather

I loved it! It was hot, but it was funny at the same time! And a little random, how Harry just walked into the room and Hermione was standing there in her knickers and he asked if he could come to the shower with her lol... I loved it! It's awesome!!! I can't wait to read more of your fics! You're amazing!!!
-Michelle

good good good good good good good good good good

omg! that was such a good story! i was smirking the whole time (= absolutely *LOVED* your story!

that was... AMAZING *though kinda like Harry after he "released into her" I don't think that even comes CLOSE to how WONDERFULLY written and planed out that was*

you're REALLY gifted. keep it up.

-megz-

Why are u not updating !!!

It's such a very very gooood story !!

More great times for Harry and Hermione are coming, I hope ....

Don't forget to update plzzz !!!!!

Wow, sweet story. On the kinky side with the whole teacher-student thing here at the end, but it's cute and funny. Keep up the good work.

What an great story...sexy, romantic, funny, witty dialogue. Just wonderful. Please write more...

Interesting story. Loved the banter between the two, and of course Ron's cluelessness.