Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/04/08
yay! just as i thought it couldn't get any hotter! wow!!! i mean.. really.. wow! |
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Jade EyesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/08
this was soooo hot! well, i kinda think that they were really being pathetic what with the way they were acting? lol! i hope it'll be hotter in the next chapter  keep on rockin'  |
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Wow
How erotic and heady
Your one of the best smut writes I’ve read yet, very vivid
I’ve enjoyed all of your stories on this pen and your other name
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loonette7Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/07/07
Fantastic! Best smut fic I've read so far. Bravo, I say! Bra-vo  |
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ChshreSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/04/07
I seriously love all ur stories cuz the writin is so good in just that way that conveys emotion is just that way |
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very hot! I think u should write up a sequel! |
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Great start. I think itz really funny! Kinda gross though. I like gross, becuz I'm strange! But seriously u rate high in my chartz and u have better spelling then some OTHER people *cough*serpentclone*cough* so there A+++++++ |
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Brilliant story, I absolutely loved it! You definitely have a fabulous imagination... I loved all the bits about 'Harry Junior', as well as Harry's kinky little obsession involving sniffing Hermione's knickers...
You're a great writer.
I also loved the bit with Ron in the end
I look forward to reading more of your stories (both old ones and any new updates that you might post - hopefully sooner and not later).
-Michelle |
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Oh, it WAS a good review.
I'm glad I found your fics. I didn't know about you until you reviewed mine- thanks, by the way- and I think you're a great writer and I'm definitely reading more of your stuff.
hugs,
Heather   |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much |
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Well. 
That was a healthy dose of pure, undiluted smut.
Let's see, couple words-
hot...detailed...inventive. lol.
Whew! |
Author Feedback: Thank you (at least I hope that was a good review).
This was probably the smuttiest thing I've ever written or ever will write. I hope you'll read some of my other stories too; for some reason I feel like I need to apologize for the porniness here. Oh well. Thanks again. |
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absolutely wonderful!!! i really really loved it!!! one of the best smut stories i've read in a long time!!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much. This took me forever to write, but I really liked how it turned out. I'm glad you enjoyed it too |
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HOLY CRAP! THIS IS AWESOME!
This is a very interesting, fun, and kinky take on Hermione and Harry behave while oblivious to each other's love/lust for each other. Reading it just sucks me in and wanting more. Hope chapter two proves just as interesting and kinky! hehe Thanks for sharing! |
Author Feedback: Hi - sorry it took me so long to reply. Thanks for the nice review of chapter 1. I hope you enjoyed chapter 2 just as much. |
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Wow, that was awesome! I wonder if some guys do get off on the panty sniffing thing. *ponders* Well written H/Hr smut! |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much and yes, that's an actual kink some people have. I just thought it would be interesting for Harry to have a bit of a sexual quirk. Glad you enjoyed the story |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/03/06
have you thought about writing a sequel?? it would be interesting to see what would happen if harry and hermione went into the sex toy store together??? definetly something interesting, i'm sure. i think that you should give it a shot |
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Also, I thought the chocolate sauce was SEXY TO THE HIGHEST LEVEL!!! Way to go, awesome story, and holy fuck, that story was amazing! Great job! 