stoooopid story a waste of time and bytes try again duh sheesh

Harry deserves to have a big happy family. Who better to make that family with but Hermione.

That's so sweet! I absolutely loved it! You really are a brilliant writer! I wish it was a bit longer or more details, but its brilliant nevertheless! I really loved it!
-Michelle

I'm not sure, but I think you have a little math problem here.

In the first chapter, you say that H/HR have had the best 6 months of there lives, and they got married fresh out of Hogwarts. In this chapter, you said again, that they've been married for 6th months. How is it possible, then, that Harry's been teaching DADA for 2 years? That would have him starting teaching sometime in his 6th year (and what is Remus teaching if Harry is the DADA teacher?). Secondly, that means that Hermione is, I believe, 19. She's been seeing her 40ish year old Gynocologist as a doctor for a "few years", and before that they dated breifly. That means that as a 16/17 year old, she was dating a guy who was, if not 40 yet, very close to it? I dont know, maybe I'm missing something here. I never have been very good at math.

Anyway, a small detail you may want to think about, but it wont stop me from enjoying your story.

hmmmmm i wonder why harry screamed lol i like this i like smut

again, wow, the hormones. crazy.

i have to say that i didn't see any of this coming. i thought it was going to be a romance or something - some sort of birthday surprise for Harry or some kind of special anniversary...something. but, it was sweet anyway.

it's always a relief to enter a story where Harry and Hermione are already together. it makes me so happy to see them so happy together. thanks for writing this!

she's a month early. oh my. i hope the baby's ok. and her first pregnancy too.

geez, i hope i'm never that bad if i ever get pregnant. i'll just have to keep that in mind.

good job on the mood swings. it wasn't a stretch of the imagination to see her yelling at him like that and to see him reacting like that. Harry is so sweet. but i'm sure it took a little getting used to.

well, he took that well, which is good. i wonder how Ron and Annie will react?

and i guess Harry has completely forgotten about his day and how hungry he is too...

i thought at first that Hermione was upset about it. it didn't sound like she had planned it and Hermione doesn't seem to be the kind of person to have things happen without planning them. then again, i've never been in her position, so it's hard for me to think of how i'd react. shock is the word that comes to mind...

so, why did Hermione go to the muggle doctor for a check up? couldn't she have gone to Poppy or something?

personally, i'd rather not know about Hermione's previous little "stints", in my head i like Harry and Hermione to get together first and only with each other...but that's ok. that's just my thing.

Hermione figured that out quickly. but can you really see the baby on ultrasound after only two weeks?

well, Ron is certainly good natured about Harry and Hermione's relationship. I guess he's grown up a bit.

that's neat that they work at Hogwarts together. i can picture both of them as teachers...just another way that they seem to fit so well together.

i'm assuming this is post-Voldemort time now?

it's fun to see them having so much fun. and i'm so glad that the trio is still inseparable...at least in most things.

it's fun so far...

Lol Once again poor Harry! Hermione's a piece of work. I'm glad it was a girl, I like baby girls. And I love the name, it's a good different. Keep Writing!

lol Poor Harry! I don't think I've ever known a pregnant woman with mood swings like Hermione's. Yay! It's baby time! I can't wait to see what she says to him him in the delivery room. hehe Great chapter! Keep Writing!

Yay! Everybody's happy! For a minute there I thought Harry was going to be upset. I'm glad he's not though. Keep Writing!

Yuck I hate throwing up. Hermione slept with her gynecologist? That's got to a little awkward. Anyways, I'm so excited! A baby?! That baby is going to be incredibly cute and lucky to have such awesome parents! Keep Writing!

hehe I love free time before dinner. I feeling this is going to be a great story. Keep Writing!