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Mai_Dreizehn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/09
really cool. totally Luna, totally Ron. i wish there would be a sequel to this, Ronald's Surprise or something...
 

ladyromance
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/07/09
haha!!! go Luna!

Although I like determined and strong male Ron, I loved how a bit insecure he was at the end, when Luna just started taking control... go Luna
 

loonette7
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/07
That was really nice and sexy.

My only problem was Lavender's name kept coming up. If you're gonna have sex with the woman you are ABOUT to love then I guess it's safe to say, "YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO THINK ABOUT OTHER WOMAN!" lol (Someone told me that, I don't really know)

Will there be a sequel? You know of Ron surprising Luna? I'd really like to know. Fantastic work!
 

Alana
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/03/07
All this time I have been blushing shamlessly for reading smut. But, you're wonderful rhythm of keeping "smut" and flow together is amazing.
I don't know if you've ever read "The Catcher in the Rye" but Ron sounds just like Holden lmao...

Anyway, thank you for the story...thank you for the humor...thank you for an enjoyable 7 mins during this otherwise boring afternoon.
 

Zeelthor
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/06
Fantastic. Fun and erotic.
An amazing story really.
I'll check the other stuff you've written some other time
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/05/06
good job. you really brought out the ooo ooooh oooh masturbate oooh ooooh ooo. masturbate.. hm hm. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. awesome.
 

megan
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
hey it was great... i liked te humor in it. You might want to write the story where ron lost his virginity, im sure you could have fun with that one. anyway keep up the good work!!
 

Kelsey
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/05
omgsh that is sooo good!! its funny and just plain awesome!!
 

Phoebe
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/08/05
Woah. I LOVE this. I had no idea. This piece is awesome. Well written, humorous and highly rated. I support R/LL, though I don't normally read fics which center around them. After this, I think I'll reconsider

I'm really glad I e-mailed you now!
 

many_miles_away
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/08/05
*shudders*

Okay. So, well, really, het isn't for me. So I stopped as soon as the clothes came off, I'm sorry. It's not only that I find myself actually repulsed by it (I would have never thought! Heh, I guess I really must be gay, then, addiction to Ewan McGregor notwithstanding), but het alwyas seems weirdly OOC. I can read stuff about Snape fucking Harry on his desk and think it's all okay, but Ron and Luna getting it on sounds OOC. Go figure.

Anyway, I still wanted to tell you that the beginning was really nice! And most of all, ohmygod, this paragraph, I love it to tiny little pieces. It's exactly what I think about Ron/Hermione ever since HBP came out. It's wonderful:

It’s a funny thing, though. Even though I keep yelling, an part of my mind is analysing what she said, and I realise that she might just be right about Hermione - all these years I’ve been telling myself that one day she’d be with me and that we’d stop our bickering long enough to fall into each other’s arms. Maybe other people expected it as well and that’s the reason it’s died, I don’t know. Now that I think about it, the idea of us seems like a worse cliché than that of her and Harry getting together - although not by much. But yeah, maybe she’s got a point.
 

ginnymalfoy21
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/05
This was the first fanfic I've read in almost half a year and Im really glad it was for it was great! I love Ron and Luna together!! I forgotten how much I love this ship... thanx for reminding me ! Great Job! I hope you write more R/Lu stories (or maybe a little sequal... just a suggestion) Again great job! Read you later!! !!
 

Mary6707
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/07/05
Yummy, that was a delicious. I do love Ron and Luna together. That was really cute too. I love it when Luna goes all amazon woman, and takes control of Ron when heis being a moron. Like he and Hermione would ever work. Yeah, only ten more days to HBP. I am glad I have these great ficlets to hold me over untill then.
 

Harrysgrl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/05
hahaha... nice ending... i liked the setting of this story. good job. can't wait to hear more from you!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/05
that was great!! you are very good.

the snape thing at the very very end was funny! :thumbsup:
 

Time Pensive
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/07/05
Oooooh. I sense the possibility of a another story. I don't normally read Ron/Luna, but this was quite good.

I'm impressed.
 

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