q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/08
It is an abused starting plot but it leads to a nice end. |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/08
I've read this one before, but I had to read it again, its just too cute!  I love the title its very unique to the story in itself, good job it was magical!  |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/07
wow..nice fic you have here... gosh, wish i would find something like that.. thumbs up!! good job!!!
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
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That was so sweet!  I really like the cinderella idea behind it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/12/05
Wow. Sweet and kind. Wonderful, at the same time precious. Lovely. By the way my name is Emma. Nice to reply to you.  |
Author Feedback: Hi Emma! I'm glad you liked it!  |
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BellachaosUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/05
That was really cute and sweet. I liked the Cinderella aspect of Hermione leaving a hair clip with "Prince Harry" |
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Also very cute. Oh, I read 'P is for Pregnant' first. I think this was a very good idea. It has the potential of a novel length fic. However, cut and dry seems to work. I'm sorry. I didn't mean that your writing was dry. Just that it was very to the point. Sometimes we all just need that. I think it was very good, as I said. I wish you the best with any other stories you're working on. Cheers ~ Megan |
Author Feedback: Both the stories that are up here now are one-shots. I never really intended for them to go longer, or even attempt a multi-chaptered story, cause I am the slowest updater EVER. That said, the first chapter of a five-chaptered story is being beta'd right now, so you should see it up in a few days!
Thanks so much for the reiview! I'm glad you liked both stories! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/08/05
haha that was great! Brill! It was so good i was looking for the next page! |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/08/05
What can I say? aaaawwwww  That was so sweet it was almost horrible. LoL. That didnt make sense. I LOVED IT! love it love it love it. I found the "swish and flich" awesome, and the ball was just wicked. Did I mention I loved it?  |
Author Feedback: Yes, you mentioned you loved it. But feel free to say it as many times as you want.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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BeppoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
WOW!
this is a great story. very well written and all.
please write more.
Beppo Gunnar
Bonn, Germany |
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DaisySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
Aww, that was cute. Their kiss at the ball was great. I loved the whole Cinderella aspect of it. Great job |
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Abby WUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
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Aww, very cute. Everybody needs some lighthearted fluffliness every once and awhile, don't they? This was just so sweet. And I loved the idea of the swish and the flick. Great job! |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/07/05
Awesome! Cinderella-ish with a Locator spell on a hair clip rather then the glass slipper.. or girl with one shoe (Korean Cinderalla.. volunteer for a kids reading group... and coincednetly that's what was read today.... ) sorry for that side track.. really enjoyable! |
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nice job! very creative! it was totally believeable, too. i like the idea of the masks and voice changing. i love the part where they both make the realization. great job! i really enjoyed reading this. |
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