Love the story, it was just brillant and beautiful. Can't wait for some more stories from you, I know they will rock!! |
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PamSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 01/04/06
I have been following this story after I read its prequel. I was so happy every time you uploaded a new chapter!  What else can I say? It's so wonderful. I love the setting, the plot, the characters. This is one of the best AU-fics I've read. You set up things so perfectly. I'm glad H/Hr lived happily ever after.  They do deserve to be happy. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 31/03/06
What an awesome great story ! The best one yet !
Have you ever thinking of publishing this as a real novel, with different names of characters of course, and further editing/meating up?? Like giving more roles to Dumbledore, Sirius, even make Voldermort more villain (just a thought)?
Do you realise that it is already a new great epic?
I'm really drawn to it, can't believe it's in the form of a fanfic. The language is very moving, the actions enjoyable, the love is to die for. What's more, it's so very believable as an A/U. It's great to read a story which is a mixture of Lord of the Rings, Robin Hood, Braveheart, King Arthur/The Sword in the Stone and Harry Potter of course, and you brought the best parts out of these legends.
I've read Survival of the Fittest, too and loved it, but this one is the best.
Have I said enough as an anonymous reader?
This is the longest review I've made!! Go and publish it !
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NOOO!!! I can't believe its over!! It's so perfect, you never seem to disapoint, that was an amazing story. absolutely brilliant. Your writing skills are the level of an actual author....are you an actual author!?!?! Omg let me read your books, sign them!! AMaing chapter, amaing fic, amazing everything. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!! |
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ibiangersSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 24/03/06
bravo!! bravo!!
i love you, twitch e. littleferret!
you're one of the best portkey writers!
go pumpkinpie!  |
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Wow, am I glad that I ventured back into the fandom! I've been devouring your stories for the past couple weeks, having only recently discovered them, and they are beyond incredible. Every single one of them (and forgive me that I didn't review each and every one; I am quite lazy in that regard) but they all are truly enjoyable and I've spent many happy hours reveling in your creativity. I tend to avoid AU stories, but great goodness! These were delicious!
It is truly wonderful, all the writers out there onboard this incredible ship, and I'm proud to be on it (even if I don't plan to ever write fanfic again). If we're to go by what the latest book seems to be insisting, it's clear that Rowling hasn't a friggin' clue about anything important. Thankfully, as your stories and that of others have demonstrated, plenty of people out there do.
Eagerly looking forward to more of your work! Keep it up  |
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~Lils~Signed | Chapter : 22 | Date : 23/03/06
Great Ending  I loved it. I wonder what color are the eyes of Lily ?! Anyways great ending to a great story! |
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jabbaSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 23/03/06
Yay!!!
What a wonderful ending to a great, truely great story. I remember finding your gem of a story Pieces of Us on FF.net and you have improved your writting since then. Each story has been getting better. I am so happy with the ending of this, this has kept us all guessing and I love that about you. Great job, keep it up! |
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AZIUnsigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 23/03/06
That was beautiful  All the wait was worth it! Wonderful, excellent I have no words to describe your writing |
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=/ so sad when such a great, great, great, great (can't stress that enough) story has ended. The finish was quite expected but I can't help but feel a sense of deja vu at it... Perhaps the similar to the ending of the chronicles of narnia the lion the queen and the wardrobe? but that's just me
i do hope that you get to write another story... oh wait you are writing one already  i can't wait to see how Harry finally discovers that it's Hermione that he wants and not Ginny... =/
anyway, great story!  keep up the good work  |
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not bad! i didnt want to see it end, but i still wanted t know what happened!- i no i'm a helpless case!
i think it was a little short, but i dont think there was much you could go on about in this... it was sweet and i really liked it!  i do hope that you do a sequel to Survival of the Fittest, i really want to know what happened to Draco in that one.
Love YOUR WORK!
~Your Crazy Fan: Alexandra |
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strangerSigned | Chapter : 22 | Date : 23/03/06
Short and extremely sweet. I love it  . a great ending to the greatest fic ever. Tho i can't say that i'm not sad. you have to write another story like this, one thats am AU. i love those  good work!
God bless |
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AW! i didn't want it to end!!
Such a great fic, I loved it!
I say another one should come....B/c i just can't get enough 
Great Epilouge! All your fics are great! |
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aww!! it's finally over!!  I'm really going to miss this story!!! but it was absolutly amazing! i loved every twist in turn in this story/small series! i loved every minute of it! and this chapter was great! i loved seeing James talking and older, and then little Sirius. And yet also seeing an even newer baby there! it was just so heart warming to read! i really just can't stop say how good this story was and i'm really sad to see it end. But it was fabulous! i can't wait until more of your stories. and great job with this one!
~*~Sweet Memories |
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