That was really cute. I thought it was great. I didn't see any mistakes, but that was because I wasn't looking for too much. I thought it was interesting how they just sorta got "bored" with each other. I am sorry there isnt' much constructive critisim here. It was a cute fic.

This was great! You know what you wrote is very similar to what I am writing right now, except that they're not married and they actually broke up! I know...Harry and Hermione should be together. I love your story. I like the ending though, where he was talking to his daughter. "“So, you guys basically fought because you were bored? Seems rather dumb to me.” I love that line! Good job! ^_^

Very touching. I totally enjoyed it. Your heart just goes out to them at a time like that. I thought the ending with their daughter was sweet. Keep up the good work.

Oh..and hope ya figure that italic thing. I was wondering about that.

*can't help but go "AWWWW!"*

Sorry, love stories like this. I think that you did a very good job, but half way through the story down it was all in italics. You may want to fix that.

~Mars

Great story. Nice that they were able to work out their problems in the end and have a happy life together.

nice story i quite like the scenario you played out. so fluffy!