wafballSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/01/06
Aww, this was not poorly conceived at all. In fact, I love the way you captured all the nervous jitteryness at the beginning. But the closing sentence - that was the best! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/06
OMG THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FICS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and the prequel to it!) PLEASE! write another sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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hubba-hubba. That was very hot. Both stories were! I love the light-hearted HHr, no baggage allowed, definitely needed after HBP. Wicked story.  |
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BazzaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/06/05
You say it was a useless continuation, I say it was brilliant. Great work - it's really funny and I really like it. The last conversation is really cute - I especially like one of the last lines.
Anyway - keep up the great work. I'm off to read some more of your brilliant stories! |
Author Feedback: Thanks Bazza. Great to hear from you again. And, yes, it is a useless continuation. But hey, what sequel isn't at heart, useless and exploitive?
Well, except Bill and Ted's Bogus Journey. Recent trilogies aside, that's the best sequel ever made. 
Anyspoo, thanks for the review. Hopefully I'll be hearing from you again.  |
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BooknutSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/05
I liked this. It seems that all your fics are well written. I love the kind of Bridget Jones thing you've got Hermione doing it's really hilarious. I can't wait for you to create more of these. Good Job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks a bunch Booknut. Always great to hear from you. Thanks for picking up the BJ Diary thing. Yeah, I'm a bit Fielding-mad at the moment, and it tends (I hope) to carry over into my fics.
Again, thanks for the review. |
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usha88Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/05
How cute! I loved it. Great way to end it. Very lovely. I liked how she was nervous at first and then finally went out to see him.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks usha. Nervous Hermione tends to be more realistic, I think. Some people write her approaching sex with Harry like he's some extra credit assignment. I just don't see that. But hey, as long as it all works out to the same Harmonious ends, I'm happy. Thanks again for the review. |
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This could have been a great SWS piece. If you ever decide to write NC17 stories start with revising this one. |
Author Feedback: Thanks Leprechaun. You were my first reviewer ever, and here you are, still helping me along the Harmony fanfic road. (Sighs) What did I do to deserve you?
I dunno about the SWS. Most of my attempted smut reads like crappy romance novels, with words like "hardening members" and "hot cores" and "sweet juices" and whatnot. But I'll work on my vocabulary if you keep reviewing. Okay? |
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oOo.... I LOVE sequels! lol. Another briliant piece. though I am disappointed... where's the -so-lovely smut? jk.
AS Always~Pheniox_Girl |
Author Feedback: Hey...I leave the quality smut to writers like Fenriswolf and JanieB. My stuff is more about banter than, ahem, twap and slap. But thanks for the review. If you have any suggestions for another sequel, tell me. Cuz, I dunno. I just don't have a clue, continuation-wise. |
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LynneySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/05
She pushed him further down her body, clever code for ‘shut up and do that thing with your tongue.’
Little did they know they’d end most of their late-night talks the same way.
Okay - you ARE the master. (bows down)
What a nice surprise to find this posted. Thanks!
Make like Star Wars - I think prequels and sequels galore are in order! Or, just write something else. Either way, I'll be reading it
Lynney |
Author Feedback: Lynney... prequels like Star Wars? Did you even watch Episode II? I don't want my stories to suck now do I?
jk. But seriously, Attack of the Clones was retarded.
But this review wasn't. In fact it was fantastic.You're fantastic. Thanks again... |
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KeithaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/05
Lol, that was cute in a sexual way. I liked it, good strange sequel. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, there was sex, but only by popular demand. Normally I wouldn't touch smut writing with a ten foot pole. He he. "Pole."  |
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AriannaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/05
I loved this sequel and it's not poorly conceived! On the contrary, this is wonderful! Their little gestures, Harry asking "Is it for me" and then even asking for permission "May I..."...really sweet and realistic. You're great! |
Author Feedback: Aww shucks Arianna. Yeah, I think Harry would be all soft and sweet and may-I-like his first time with Hermione. I dunno, slapstick and sex don't usually strike me as Harmonious, but hey, it's a follow up to a fic invovling an Eagle's song. All bet's are off. |
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"Little did they know they’d end most of their late-night talks the same way."
You say that like that was a bad thing; it sure beats the heck out of curlers, cold cream and crackers in bed! Nice sequel, I always enjoy it when H/Hr start to banter ala Harry Dangerously...more one-shots like this, please! |
Author Feedback: Oh. My. Gods. The inimitable Fenriswolf just quoted me....*chugs Niquil and pops a few tranquilizers*
(gasps as liver fails) Okay. I'm good now.
Thanks so much for the review. Yeah, I wouldn't seeing a randy Harry just before I fell asleep. Beats MST3K reruns, but only just slightly.
No, in all seriousness. I love that show...
Anyspoo, thanks again for the review. |
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