Poetically written. It's such a darling ficlet, I love it to pieces. I commend you greatly on this. Excellent work.

OMG! that was the saddest thing I have ever read!
in such few words you passed such a huge message!

It takes a true Judas to have sex with your dead friends girl in his own bed.

This was... um... intense. I can't think of much else. There are so few words, but so much emotion. It's pretty amazing.

That a very strange and different concept than I've ever seen for a situation in which Harry is dead. And that's a good thing.

It was written very beautifully, and it was so heartbreaking that this is what they have become. You're very good.

And the last line is simply amazing.

I disagree with the other reviewer that said that this doesn't belong on Portkey. It's clearly a H/Hr story, with Ron acting out the role as Harry for her. That's the beauty of the concept that you created.

I really really loved this. Good job.

To the last reviewer, how exactly is that rape? It's utterly twisted, but the text makes it quite clear it's consensual. It's not like Hermione didn't see who it was.

Muhaha what a git.. thats rape nothinng more ore less.. he`s just raping her...

well thats seems to be another Fic^^ where Ron becomes the git he is.. that`s going to be interesting.. go on

Wow! This was a really good story! But, it was really sad too!

Had to think about this one, that was probable the intention. Very well done and very different. Heart breaking, without the over the top angst that so many write. Felt very sad for both of them. The preveiw said in progress, but this felt more like a very sad one shot. I wonder how you would continue this, and for some of the readers here I'm sure they're going to want you to, so that it ends more H/Hr. So much isn't intirely clear, were Harry and Hermione together before this? In the end were Ron and her actually going to have sex or just hold each other? If Harry does come back how will he react to this? Good job, hope there is more.

I dont get it? Is Harry dead? Or Ron? Im very confused!? Please give me answers!

It was a wonderfully written piece of angst, but I'm not so sure it belongs here on Portkey. It sounds to me like Hermione is using Ron as a sex surrogate to get over her feelings for Harry.

Is this a one shot, or do you plan on adding more?

Wow.

That was brilliant.

I felt so terrible for both Ron and Hermione, and it all worked so well. I just kind of stared at the screen when I was done reading this, taking it all in.

That was really amazing. Thank you for writing this.

Well.... Hmmm... Amazing incredibly well-written. The emotions were so raw I felt so sorry for Ron.

That was odd.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

A beautiful sad piece of excellent work.
Really liked it!
Poor Hermione.