the top student should be able to defend herself as she obviously had to score high in DADA.

“Well, I guess that's settled. We have to get married at some point. My Mum, may she rest in peace, would never forgive me if I didn't marry you, and your parents might be a little hurt. My eighteenth birthday is in July, the thirteenth, so we should get married around then...” - please for the love of (insert something cherished here) be kidding. no teenage boy (or man of any age really) signs his freedom away to a girl so fast. no. he's serious. NOT LOGICAL!...beautifully fluffy AFTER they start hanging out. not so found of the begining though.

no one knew her name when she annouced it? priceless. i would have pretended to look for me too, asking people if they knew a lily, just for the fun of it.
James smiled gently. “Well, I guess that's settled. We have to get married at some point. My Mum, may she rest in peace, would never forgive me if I didn't marry you, and your parents might be a little hurt. My eighteenth birthday is in July, the thirteenth, so we should get married around then. But until then we should not go out with anyone and try to get to know each other more. You can hang around with the rest of the guys and I, if you like.”
lord in heaven let that boy be kidding. 'hi my name is james. we should get married in the next five months.'
and why didn't lily fight back? top of her class, head girl, witch. she didn't toutch her wand.

so you write yourself into your stories? or are they daydreams?

OMG!!! I love this story! It is soooooo AWESOME!!! But I hate the way that you made Lily friendless until she was seventeen!! Other than that I loved the whole story!

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I LOVE your story, its amazing, I like the fact that you made Lily a loner, that definetly helps to seperate you story from all the cliche ones of two popular people hooking up. great idea that she isn't even noticed. so ur allergic to make-up? don't worry, this means that you can't have one of your friends do a horrible job and make you go out in public. trust me from pearsonal experiance.

ya but how come they know they have to marry each other so sooon

well this is kinda interesting but I dont like her knowing her fate too soon

oh well how sad and what a "lovely" (sarcastic tone but not in a mean way in a jokeing way)ah but it had to be their deaths well so sad *peron hands tissue to me and I say my thanks and wipe my eyes* well great story to bad you diddnt write lily's sisters reaction but that was your choice and it would not fit what you wrote but oh well GREAT story! w00t go you!

OK! Oh My God! you like have to put how she tells her sister in this last chapter of yours (by the way im not to happy about that I waned that to be longer but great plot!)and you MUST MUST MUST oh please please please put the wedding in here oh great story cant beleive its over *sigh*

hey! Another awesome story so far! Cant wait for another chapter! Keep writting and updating at Portkey! ~Kelsey

well im truely sorry to say this but i have nevr trd aything so horrible,i mean ur a gret author and evrything but this chapter was jut down-right boring

interesing is the only word i can find for this story, can't wait to read more

hey. great story, i hope ul finish this one off! keep updating and il keep reading
sammi xx