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OMG I like love this story... but one thing I thought that James was a seeker...yeah well I might just be crazy...yes thats it! but I love this story |
Author Feedback: Only in the movie. In the books he was a Chaser, apparently. Maybe JK has a meaning for the snitch scene in OotP then...?
Thanks!! I'm glad you're enjoying this! Please read PP&VV and TtVoT by me; they're better than this!! And PL, AD, and my songfic...you'll probably enjoy them...
Please tell me how all the fics are, and if any are particularly good. I want to do that, too, but I've never got around to and I'm preferring good R/Ses atm...
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Great I love it so far cant wait to read more! no kidding im on the side of my seat already! but I have no Idea hoe that can be seeing that im on my bed...but this is like totally one of the best stories that ive read so far, and darling let me tell you thats something im going on reading every L/J fick in this entire site not to mention 2 other sites! But Im totallt loving this story!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 27/12/05
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Hmmm... I don't know what I think after chapter 1. It moved along awfully quickly... |
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It WAS good, actually great, keep up the good work, I've read heaps of your fics.
Also just to tell you I wish it wasn't over |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/12/05
Thats short and sweet, well done.
Hehe I like the way you write that it's a "L/J (as in Lily/James, for those of you who don't understand letter language) fic" then write "R/R" and don't explain the letter language of that. Funny.
Write more! |
Author Feedback: You have a good point. I wrote this ages ago for ff net, where everyone knew what R/R meant. It means Read/Review...
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x Cazzy x |
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oooo i like your fanfic its good cant wait for more |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! But it's finished...
x Cazzy x |
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very cute story... the ending seemed a tad rushed, but overall I'd say wonderful.  |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I guess it was rushed. Thanks!!
x Cazzy x |
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that was sooooooooooooo lame. write anuther PROPER chapter right this instant young lady!!! |
Author Feedback: I am so sorry it was so rubbish but I really hate this story now and I wanted to get it out of the way! So I know it was bad, but...uh...yuh...
Thanks!
x Cazzy x |
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DificultSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 18/10/05
Thats it? it was kind of a short blob at the end. Please go back and put some more details in! |
Author Feedback: I am so sorry it was so crap but I really hate this story now and I wanted to get it out of the way. It was originally planned to be three chapters long but one wasn't really needed and the other two were to be mushed together anyway...
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x Cazzy x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 18/10/05
u'r evil! repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat! SNAPE IS EVIL! I PROMISE U!!!!!!!! |
Author Feedback: I know Snape is evil. And I'm just as evil... *grins*
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x Cazzy x |
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i know everyone says i read really fast. I LOVED IT! i also love every thing elsr u write |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it, Alex!
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x Cazzy x |
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if u don't know who i am, i'm gonna be really mad! I finally got around to reading this story, and so far i like it. ttul! i have more reading to do! |
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 06/10/05
lol u love to shorten things, eh? GCR, HCR, HB, HG....
and now, u must continue my dear. but this is the last fic i shall read tonight. i'll get around to PPVV (or VVPP, idk i forgot lol) eventually.
probably tomorrow, as i'm bored out of my mind.
and, for a bit of constructive criticism:
try not to rush things so much. they're grieving--let them show it. i think these stories would kick butt (even more, that is), if you'd take the time and not be afraid of writing a long story. 20 or 30 chapters? yeah, but embrace it. with a plot like this (not that i know what the plot is exactly), you need time for it to develop.
quickies are for one shots--it's why they were created.
so update soon, kk love? have a good day at school byes!
Natali |
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