hey i really enjoyed this story so far! post soon!

this is a fantasic story keep up the great work! (i forgot to hit add chapter alert... im the same anonymous person... lol)

this is a really great story! keep up the great work!

Awesome story, i loved the bit where they all ended up lying on top of each other! PLease keep writing so i can read more!

Another great chapter. Lily and James are totally in the dark about how they feel about each other, and you wrote it just right.

Another great chapter. Lily and James are totally in the dark about how they feel about each other, and you wrote it just right.

This was a very good chapter. Lily and her crew are so funny!

Very good story. enjoyed much. keep on writing. one day you'll be famous

that is simply b-e-a-utiful. love the prank.i wanna do a prank like that! waaah! anyways, the flirting scene is fabulous . haha *points to mental image of l and j convincing their friends that they dont like each other* aren't oblivious people funny??

YES lily likes james and james ikes lily ,honest why cant them two just grow up and have harry already?

peter doens't HAVE to exist. do what i do, throw him in once and a while in some mundane and pointless way and he's there, you don't have to care about him adn none of the readers can give you crap about not including him. that reminds me, i need to throw him in a bit... damn it.

ok, so when is lily going to make him realize there's love?

good chap, update soon, please

YAY! Another chapter! I really like how this is. It's a typical idea, but you seem to be putting it across in a really good way. And this kind of plot makes room for a lot of swoon worthy moments when Lily and James discover that there could be more. So get to it! I can't wait for another chapter

oh im really likeing this, you should update as soon as possible

ah! its great! ha ha! well its a really good story
as for suggestions well lets see...........you could do a strange situation where james finaly gets the idea in his head that he likes lily like well I kinda think up stories in my head that authors can do but never really say them (or in this case type them) but well you could make the three girls really boerd and have them go down to the lake in there bikinis or something and have the boys getting back from a prank and james cant get the picture of lily in a bikini out of his head or something like that but its just and idea. well great story and cant wait for the next chappy!

well that was pretty good and the same kinda movie thing happend at the begining of the chappy but not as much asthe first one but still great story!