pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/12/06
Placing such an add seems OOC for anyone except whoever Fred or George would end up with! But it was fun. |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/05/06
aww, thats sweet!! well the kiss was MOST really wow!!!(if u get what i mean)
one day,..... I hope that'll happen to me, jeez! u keep on writing about things that i want to happen to me!!! Its making me impatient!! |
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CaliSunsetUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/02/06
This story was so cute. It would be really cool if it went on to tell about how the rest of the kids are brought into the family. |
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cute, very cute. stories like this are definately your forte (is that how you spell it without the accent??) anywho, nice job! |
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donald24Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/05
This is a funny cute story, thank you for bringing a laugh to my voice. Thank you again, and keep up the good work. |
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Wow! This was a really sweet ending with Harry being excitied about the baby! Great job!
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Why in the world would Hermione be scared that Harry wouldn't want the baby? It would be the thing that Harry would want most... a family of his own. Also, it was Ron, not Harry who had done most of the teasing. |
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Not a bad little fluff fic; yes, there are elements of Hermione's actions that seem a bit 'off', especially the idea of making the announcement before telling Harry. While the idea of Ron and Harry reading the announcements before hearing the news from their wives is an amusing one, the particulars could have been handled in a more in character manner.
For example, in Luna's case, she could have told her father first, especially if Ron was on a road trip or something, and he could have run a huge front page banner headline about it in the Quibbler. In Hermione's case, I could see her being uncharacteristically nervous about telling Harry, even feeling insecure about him not wanting the baby (though worrying he might hurt her seems too much), but rather than making the announcement herself, have someone like Skeeter blow the story. Perhaps she might have been observed going straight from the doctor's office to a maternity shop, something. Still, a nice attempt. Keep up with your efforts, you show a lot of promise. |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/06/05
I'm still upset about Hermione not telling Harry first, but this chapter was nice.
Poor Hermione, thinking Harry would leave her over her pregnancy.  Silly girl.
I'm so glad Harry dispelled those thoughts when he got home.
Getting in some practice for the next kid....
It would be nice of you to write about Hermione's pregnancy, and the birth.
Looking forward to more from you. |
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Ahh, this was so sweet and laugh out loud funny. I loved the bit where Harry found out  . It is a little bit out of character for Hermione, but still it is a really good idea and story. It would be cool if there was the part where Ron went home to Luna and told her that he new, that would be so cute.
Emily
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Author Feedback: I loved writing this story and making it all sweet and stuff! I agree that Hermione was a little OOC, but I did that so that it would fit into the story. I might eventually do a one-shot about Ron and Luna and the news. Thanks so much for reviewing! |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/05
Very cute...it just made me smile! We need stories like this to balance the dark and angsty ones! Poor Harry and Ron, they seem a little shocked! How did the Minute Ministry find out these bits of news? Did the girls spill the beans or is it some kind of magical thing that automatically happens when a magical baby is conceived? Just a thought that ran through my head...good job! |
Author Feedback: I agree, there are a lot of angsty fics out there, but most of them are good to read. I love reading these types of stories too, though. As you'll soon find out in the second part, Hermione and Luna decided to post it in the Minute Ministry all on their own. So, to answer your question, no, it doesn't automatically get posted, they have to spill the beans. Hope that clears it up! Thanks for reviewing! |
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Hahaha, what a way for Harry and Ron to find out their partners, Hermy and Luna are having babies |
Author Feedback: I know, I loved the idea as soon as it popped in my head. Thanks for reviewing! |
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siaraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/05
i luv this fic!!!!!!!!! i hope u upd8 soon!!!!!!! great work, and keep it up!!!!!!!
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Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm planning on updating later his weekend; it's pretty much done now. Hope you'll enjoy it! |
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solmayraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/05
I think that this story is the nicest story i ever did read in fact it is funny and nice |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I really hope it comes across as being both of those. Hope you'll stick around to read the final part when I finish writing it! |
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Sneaky is right, though that is almost mean. Well, now that the whole Ministry knows, Ron is going to have to marry Luna quick! hehehe
I figured out what was going on when both men commented on the girls being moody, been there, done that, three times.
Look forward to more. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing one of my stories again! Yes, I agree with it being sneaky, but I hope it doesn't come off with being too mean.
Yeah, I figured the part about them being moody would give it away. I've read fanfics and stories with pregnant woman, but hopefully won't have to go through it myself for a while, since I'm only 15.
Hope you enjoy the next part when it comes out! |
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