AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/06
Good story. It has a very good start. What does harry look like |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/05/06
Very good chapter. I can't believe he told her he loves. I love this story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/05/06
Very good chapter. I can't believe he told her he loves. I love this story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/05/06
Very good chapter. Please please put them together soon, or might cry |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 30/05/06
Very good chapter. Please please put them together soon, or might cry |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/06
Good story. It has a very good start. What does harry look like |
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oh man one of the most graphic, best, smutty fics out there.....lots of present times with the past and all the URST during the fall. WONDERFUL. hahha, entertaining to say the least.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com |
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I just reread this, and I can never decide which chapter is my favorite. I just love the whole story so freakin' much!! |
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Wow, I really liked this story, it is so realistic, that type of thing would really happen, but I doubt Ron would be so happy about it, or at least try to push the idea about Harry and Hermione. He seemed so wise and everything there at the end, so un-Ron-like but other than that, it was a great story, very well written. |
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hum... quite a bit smutty, but i guess it was hte plan , uh?
poor harry, a whole year without smut for him :-) |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/12/05
Love how you managed to intertwine a plot into all this |
Author Feedback:
Plots are important sometimes.
~Belle |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 06/12/05
Whineeee. So evilLLL! Yet....good! Love it  *sneaks off to finish the fic* |
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GoldySigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 02/12/05
Word cannot properly express how much I love this fic. I think I've read it twice now - once before the release of HBP and again late last night when I should have:
A) Been studying
B) Working on my own fic
Or, most importantly,
C) Sleeping
But you had me hooked pretty much from the first paragrah (again!) and I couldn't stop. It's not just the smut that makes this fic good (though, that part is very, very nice), but the angst and pain and emotions all come across wonderfully. You even mix in some humor to balance it all out.
I think my favourite part is when they're both in the Three Broomsticks and Harry's going over their first time together. After that, when they *look* at each other and he thinks the "I love you" THAT was simply amazing. The emotions, the setting, it was all so intense. You could FEEL it as a reader.
This is one of those fics that makes you cry and laugh and sob with relief when the end comes and they work things out. It stays with you after you're finished and it's perfect to come back to on a rainy day. Fantastic job. |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 02/12/05
Ok, this has got to be one of the most perfect ... I don't really know what to call it. It's not really a smutlet, is it? Too long and plotty for that. And just calling it 'fic' doesn't do it justice. So, uh... what a hot little number this was. I love smut with plots. Couldn't have asked for anything more perfect if I'd had the idea for it myself. I'm so glad I happened upon it. Now, I'm off to read the rest of your work! Such a lucky reader I am, I see quite a little list below this review box.  |
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I'm new and couldn't figure this out, so I'm adding this again to say I loved the story and everything is on my faves!! |
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