that was erotic...
my gosh..!!!
lolzz...
but it was very passionate..
while reading it my chest actually tighten with excitement... good job

Wow, this was an Excellent story. Honestly I adore it, and I even might read it again I loved it so much. I have to look through your other stories and see if you did indeed add more on to it. And I can't wait to read your other stuff as well.

Oh Harry. She loves you too, you'll see, just as soon as I click next.

So basically I now need a shower. This is sooo excellent. I can't wait to read more.

Oh wow, at those mouthed words my heart dropped. This was such great writing, I love when I read or see something that is back and forth between different time periods and as each one ends it makes me long for the next time it begins again. So good.

Brilliant! Utterly breathtaking. Where do I even begin? I seriously loved the tension, the frustration, the duel. All was delicious.

Umm... holy crap that was amazing. Seriously, I'm all hot and bothered, and speechless, and I kind of want to throw up, but I may just be hungry, and then again those knots might be from something else entirely.

That was amazing, I have to admit this fic is now one of my fav fics, seriously you did an amazing job. WOW. Congrats for being such a great writter.

Love it love it love it it one of the best if not the best

Oh my god this is an amazing story. I dont know if you still write but if you do please please please deo a follow on to this story. For book 7 amazing

Thankyou so much for writing it

you know something, i am going to try that warm shower thing. i want to see if it works.

wow!!!! that was a fantastic story!!! i really hope this isn't the end, simply because its one of those stories that you never want to end. though this was a good ending if it was the ending...oh dear, i'm confusing my self. anyway, great story!!!!!!!!

Hehe, thoroughly entertaining. I loved their internal monologues, fascinating characterisation and heart breaking circumstances, but all very smutty Great job.

This is possibly one of the best stories I have read on Portkey, and believe me, I have read ALOT!

Keep it up!

-Kourtz

I love snarky and slightly unhinged Harry. I love that this story is genuinely sexy and enthralling without being cheap or voyeuristic (a very fine line in most cases!) I love that this fic captures the inherent horniness in teens without being patronizing about it ( like some authors are prone to doing.) Overall, brava on an excellent fic!