yeah. it was dark enough...but i liked it. i like your Harry, he's edgy. good job

Wow. One of the best things i have ever read. I loved reading it andthat the ending was so surprising (I thought he'd die for sure!). I hope that you write something like this agein soon. Thank you.

Mmmm... not dark enough. I mean, maybe at the beginning it felt dark but i would've like him to die and then a big amount of sorrow from hermione's part (she could have killed herself too, i don't know). But the song's nice, maybe you could use these slipknot's song vermilion or prosthetics in a future dark fic, that's my opinion anyway but besides not being dark enough it was pretty well written and the plot is good

Wow... extremely dark. I seem to like dark fics, probably because they're deep. Much deeper than fluff. I also just read Hermione's Revenge, very good!

It was dark. It was good. I'm glad I didn't cry though.

sick your a sick little woman you know that but tactfully written and well thought out

Woo...I shivered. And it's like....80 degrees here. I feel so cold now. Dark fics i seem to like more than fluff, because good dark fics seem deeper than fluff. Waaaay....deeper. Fantastic job. I just read Hermione's Revenge too. That was awesome!!!!

-- Sage

hi, honestly i though that was a good read, although it was darkish it was much better that fluffy.
peter

Quite dark, and I often marvel at how Harry doesn't actually just take a knife and--you know. It wouldn't be far fetched. I like the way you carried the tone all the way through, even when Hermione saved him. That kind of darkness never ever leaves someone afflicted of it, and those who get through it alive spend the rest of their lives taking it one day at a time.

excellent story. i can see this happening to harry coz of all the self-guilt and him getting all depressed. its a good story for when your not in the mood for fluff but angst and fits in well with characters, definetly dark enough.

was it dark enough? yes, I believe so...

my favorite point was that he started cutting himself just to make sure that he was still bleeding red and not black or green or something. i thought that was so profound and very cannon.

i though this was an excellent darkfic. way to go.

How dark...yes, it was dark enough. But it's not SO dark because Hermione saved him. yay! Good job!

oh wow, i thought you were going to 8 him there for a bit. but you didn't, and i'm glad. cause now they're happily ever after.

yeah, it was dark, but i've read some that were more so. was good though. i could see it happening

Yeah, that was pretty dark. Can't really say I enjoyed it but you did write it well. Now I need to go read some fluff!

I truly hope this wasn't personal experience. I wanted to die so much when my wife and son did. My baby daughter was the only thing that made me live. I can see exactly how Harry feels. It's been nine years and I still sometimes want to jjoin her. When my abay graduates from school, maybe, I'll reconsider it. Alorkin