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Very funny and sort of cute. Much more like seventeen-year-olds than most fics I read. I'm not sure if it's a good or bad thing as the entire weight of the world is on their shoulders, but that's alright. |
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i think i read this story ages ago. but i didn't review and know who much people love to read reviews. i really liked it. it was funny and interesting read. well done |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/05
please please please tell us who he was going to ask!!!!Great story!!! |
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JWT6577Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/09/05
Not only was this the first Ron/Luna story I've ever read, but it's a story I go back to and re-read when it strikes me to.
Thank you for writing.
--JW Thompson |
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What a cute story! Luna's methods may be unorthodox, but you can't argue with results  |
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This story was cute, i found myself laughing quite a bit as i can picture the characters very vividly in that situation. Great story and it was sweet and simple! |
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DaniUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/05
That was funny. Simple and amusing. You did a good job with all the characters, none of them were out of character. Can’t wait to read more of your stuff.  |
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Blue LadySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/05/05
This fic was hilarious, especially with all the water tossing!  |
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CroyezSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/05/05
Aww...that was so cute! I liked the way Ron was so nervous about asking a girl out--he seemed perfectly in character there. =D Luna was fantastic, too, with her usual oddness and subtleness. I loved the whole water thing, it was very funny. =D Great job! |
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Nice story. It was sure hilariously funny. I loved Ron gathering everything in the last scene...
The only thing puzzling me was what Harry caught in the final quidditch match... it's the Snitch, right?
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Author Feedback: I had to check to make sure I didn't accidentally put that he had caught the Quaffle or something, but it does say Snitch. Though I don't blame you for being confused, the whole Quidditch match bit was mostly a glue bit to tie two scenes together. It might not have been entirely dry before I posted the story.  |
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Oooh. That was funny. And I'm serious. Very amusing and enjoyable. Good writing. Kinda choppy I admit but still a good concept. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, the choppiness, which I should have explained when I posted, is due to the fact that the story came to me as a series of vignettes which I (very loosely) stitched into a barebones "plot" to explain what was going on. |
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I must say, that is the best R/LL one-shot I've ever read... it was just too cute  Oh, and extra points for writing one of the very few R/LL fics that DON'T mention Crumple Horned Snorkacks  Keep up the R/LL goodness!! |
Author Feedback: You know, it didn't even occur to me to mention Crumple Horned Snorkacks, but now that you mention it, it is a bit of a Fanfic!Luna cliche. |
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