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That was absolutely hilarious! The ending was terrific! I almost fell off my chair laughing! Keep up the great writing! |
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thats bloody brilliant!!! Ohhh mr olivanders is gonna have quite a show from mr. potter and ms. granger!!!! haahahahaha |
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OMG! Lol! The cameras! No way! Lol, I liked this abot... well written! |
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Hilarious, and very funny! Who says Harry wasn't a sex god in this. I reckon his performance in the wand shop (no pun intended) was right up to scratch. |
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For a one chapter (short) story, this was very good. I had quite a time reading this fic. And, since I am a boy, I will tell you this: No. It was not too painful.  |
Author Feedback: Yay! I try to be a relatively pain-free writer but you know, sometimes you can't help but toe the fine line...
Thanks for the lovely (and funny!) review!
~Belle |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/12/05
ROfl. Oh My! Whatever shall Mr Ollivander do? Meh. It's not like they stripped |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/05
Oh, my...
(And since PK won't let me review with just those words, I'll go on to say whew, that was hot. I felt sorry for Harry at the beginning, but by the end, he had it made up to him. Well, other than that whole camera thing. I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this, where maybe Mr. Ollivander gave them their little amateur video. hehehe |
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OHMYGOD!!! That was the funniest and best story I've read in a long time. Nicely done, nicely done *tips hat*
Grade: A+ *smiles* |
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WOW... Harry, insecure?? I never thought that'd happen, well I guess everyone is, but WOW... I LOVE the story,
you're an awesome writer
keep it up
-megz- |
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Harry and the advertisement...
Of course when I saw the title I didn't think it was about Harry's particular wand... lets just think on why else Hermione bought the coconut wand.
Hmm, coconuts and wands? They'll never look the same again. |
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BellachaosUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/09/05
The ending had me laughing out loud. I would love to see a one-shot about Ollivander's reaction to the security recording. |
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Fall-Off-My-Chair hilarious! I don't know why I even doubted! I was so afraid that this "wands" thing would be--well--let's not talk about how dirty my mind is, but it was exactly what the doctor ordered to cleanse my mind of bad smut (though I don't necessarily mean bad in a bad way.) This was most refreshing and definitely goes on my favorites. ^_^ |
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*giggles* absolutely loved it.Loved the teasing between the three of them at the begining.
Exellent job
~Rach |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/08/05
Oh My God!!! Poor, Mr. Ollivander! He'll have a heart attack when looking in that chrystal thingie. jesus!! and he'll never allow harry (or hermione) into his shop again! excellent story!!! |
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Grrr, and so I have to review again because it wouldn't let me add you to my favourites list the first time  Ah well, this story deserves it... Again, AWESOME story! I will read more of you're other ones  And I know, you're probably thinking.. "Well, instead of writing another review on THIS one, why don't you go on my OTHER ones.." Well, the reason is, I think it would be unfair to review a story and not read it.. And I'm too lazy to read another story at the moment! So, my twisted logic all makes some sort of sense in the end!  , anyway.. toodle loo!  |
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