BooknutSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/05
This was really good. i love the description and detail because it makes you feel like you're really there and you get to feel what Harry's feeling. Good job. |
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BooknutSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/05/05
This was really good. i love the description and detail because it makes you feel like you're really there and you get to feel what Harry's feeling. Good job. |
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I love short pieces like this! They just melt my heart and make me smile.
I thought your characterization of Harry was spot-on; his thoughts were quick and simple, but deep. I also loved all your descriptions... they were great!
Loved it! |
Author Feedback: Oh, I love short peices as well. They touch me the most I do think.
Oh thank you! I always love to hear compliments on my characterization. It's very important to me. 
And my descriptions? Or lack-thereof? xD
Thank you so much for the kind words!
~panda |
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That was excellent. I love Death Cab for Cutie... so the song was definately a nice touch...!  Nice job. |
Author Feedback: Death Cab certainly are gods. 
I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks so much for reveiwing!
~panda |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/05
After reading this I had to drag myself away from the computer to stop myself from reading all your others, superb! |
Author Feedback: Aww.. that's always a really nice thing for an author to hear. Thank you so much! It's most flattering.
Thanks again!
~panda |
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"Harry… so that was his name. Wretchedly common name… but it didn't matter… it sounded like the most wonderful name in the world coming from her lips." Wow- what a wonderful line! I absolutely loved it.
You have such a way with simplicity- you take the best words and work them to your advantage, leaving out anything that isn't needed. It has a very direct, powerful effect on the reader.
Lovely, simply lovely.
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Author Feedback: Oh dear... I'm going to simply catch my desk on fire with the blush on my face.
I'm glad you liked that line. I'm rather found of it myself.
I always try to let the characters speak for themselves and let the READER feel instead of the author trying to get the FEELING to feel, if that makes any sense. xD
Thank you so much for those very encouraging and most flattering words. *grin* And for the reccomendation! I'm simply overwhelmed! *hugs repeatedly*
~panda |
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I don't want to gush... Okay, I will... *gush*  such a lovely one-shot.
Harry's despair and confusion was fleshed out wonderfully. And his comment made them all poignant.
'I need you so much closer.'
Nel |
Author Feedback: Ah thank you so much. I love hearing that word in my reviews... poignant. I strive to be as poignant as possible. I have a thing for poigancy. ;D
And I'm glad that his reaction was founded. I also put heavy effort into my characterization and I'm glad to hear that it wasn't completly random and out there.
But I do rather like that line, don't you? ^.^
Thanks again for the nice review!
~panda |
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Ok. Wow.
First off... I love Death Cab. The only songfics I've ever written were to DCFC songs (but that seems like forever ago and for a different fandom). And this one... was just...
Look, you have left me speechless! This was just amazing. How can something so short be so amazing? God damn. Just... great job. Great, great job. I honestly don't know what to say.
Your descriptions and the way you wrote it, it just felt so natural. I'm glad that you didn't have to force it out, and we can all tell. It's really an amazing little one shot. |
Author Feedback: Ok. Wow. Awesome review?
Yay! Another Deaht Cab fan! They're popping out of the woodwork! They are rather nice for songfic writing... I've written three based on Death Cab songs. ;D
Ah, how I love making people speechless! It's a most flattering comment.
I really don't know what to say... you've truley made my day. Thank you so much for the awesomely kind words.
~panda |
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Wow! This was a really good stroy! You were very good at describing things too!
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Author Feedback: Ah! Thank you! i like to describe things. ;D
~panda |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/05
This is an excellent little one-shot. I can't really explain why I like it so much, I just know that I did. It was very well written.
Oh, and Death Cab for Cutie rocks!!! |
Author Feedback: Aww thank you very much! I do that with stories as well... I can't really explain why I like it so much...sometimes it just can't be put into words.
And Death Cab does indeed rock. I've now written three stories based on one of their songs. xD
Thanks so much for reviewing!
~panda |
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NikkiUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/05/05
Good Christ... just kill me, why don't you?! Absolutely fantastic work, as usual... your writing makes me melt faster than the song Transatlanticism does, and I never get tired of reading your stuff. The imagery, mixed with Harry's frantic, broken thoughts is just perfect. MUCHLOVE!!!
-Nikki |
Author Feedback: *Kills*
Aww, Nikki... that's one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten. *tear*
And I was hoping to make it sound frantic... I'm glad I was sucessful at that.
*super glomps*
~panda |
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