Aww! This was such a great read. I love these tender fluffy moments between the couple. Thanks for sharing! I'm going to read the rest of your l/j stories now...

Oh, and just one error i found, which was nothing really, but i thought you'd like to know just in case...

"“Funny, how those healers always tell you what you never expect to here, huh?” "

You wrote 'here; instead of hear.. it soo not a biggie... but i have this wierd habit of telling pply when i spot these things even the most trivial... lol! ANyway, again, great one-shot!

I love your descriptions! It's so sweet, you really should keep going.

I loved it! At least James gets his first wish. But we all know what happens next.......

This is really sweet and not completely unrealistic - I could see Lily and James making a decision not to have children until after the troubles have settled. Its just a pity that, for them, it never would. Thanks for sharing - I enjoyed reading this!

I honestly dont see why u rated it PG-13. Its not good and its not bad- its something to read when you're bored.

This was very sweet. I can see Lily and James not wanting to have children till the end of the war, but being very happy when Harry came. You can tell how much James wants to be a father, and how much Lily wants him to be happy. Very sweet, and well written.

no need to love me forever, just the lenth of time it takes you to read this.

*AAAWWW*

see that was quick, now go and save your love for yourself

I love it! It's fantastic! You could turn it into a real fic if you want to, but it's perfect as it is...
ly,
J xx

great story! i think it's one of the best things you've ever written. i love all the details and the story was great. you were right to post it.

aww! that was SOO cute ans sweet. i still have a smile on my face. i kinda like this as a one-shot but if you have someplace to take this story you should definitly do it!

That was soooooo good! I loved it. You also did a good job on making short and too the point yet fulling. Good job.

I really liked this story a lot, it really made me think of Lily and James in a realistic sense. *scanters off to read your other stories*
Great job. I just < 3 one shots.

Oh, I'm glad you decided to post it here and not just on your LJ. I remember reading it. I liked it as much the second time!

It's so sweet...

soo...
soooooo.....
Sooooooooo...
SOOOOOOOOO?!?!?!?!
You have time for this but not for your other stories?!?! That is blasphemy and traitorism!
You should be mortally offended that youbother writing these when your other stories require MORE chapters!

That was really cute... and also sad at the same time because we all know what happens...