AnsoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/08/06
Ohh I Like it!!
It was soo cute!!
if they knew that they are received no other child
really, well done!!
greetz Anso |
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This was such a cute fic!! Too bad that you didn't turn it into a longer fic, but it was good on it's own.  |
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wicked sweet that just how i pictured james being so nice |
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awwwwww that was SO cute. i'm not even gonna lie, it was a touching story, that she was worried but its ok, very cute! and good work! |
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I really like this story. So very touching! Just how I pictured how James and Lily would be, only in my versions they are 19 when Lily gets pregnant, have Harry at 20, and die at 21  . |
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sharonUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/06
VEry, very nice and sweet. I really liked it and enjoyed it. I'd like to see more of you so I'll check out what other stories you have. (if you have) *crosses fingers*
Just a little thing. Little, tiny mistake. (ugh, typo  )
“Funny, how those healers always tell you what you never expect to here, huh?”
Wouldn't it be hear?
Much, much love,
Sharon ♥
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/06
wonderful!!! i love how u mentally painted a picture by describing the scene. perfect!! |
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VanillaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
Awww this was a really sweet story! Fantastic job. Keep up the good work! |
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This is so sweet, I love it! I read it over and over again! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/08/05
AAAAAwww wow, i wud love it if this story was made into a fan fic it is so awsome, and oridinal. thanx for a wonderful read. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/08/05
omg. my eye is tearing. no idea why.
i love it. it was SO cute.  really.
omg. |
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Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/07/05
Awww... that was so cute! You are a really good writer!!! |
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Awww! How sweet! Poor Lily, thinking James didn't want the baby. But he handled that very well. It breaks my heart to think that they never had the chance to make a big family like they wanted. *tear* keep writing! |
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HAHAHAHAHAH james is such a funny guy ^_^ aww how sweet. wonder how many times they'll have to do "it" until they get the results james wants... |
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annaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/06/05
hi! so sweettttttt
keep writing, i will keep reading!
bye!
anna from argentina |
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