loonette7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/07
*giggles* Harry really IS a slow learner... to think, he'd learn something by now?  I guess all men from the Harry Potter world are dense.  I love the story! |
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:gibbles: The dialogue the story fell into was lovely, and I love the way you have Hermione so worried over him and so...lol, fretful. She's adorable! |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/06
Another very good story, very well written!  Gotta love that Hermione when she's on a mission!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/05
cute but i cant grasp the concept that harry is not team captain and that he doesnt enjoy quidditch anymore  But still sweet and smuffy!!! |
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This story has got to be one of my favorite of yours.
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“Have you learned nothing in all the time we’ve been together?”
“We’ve been together three weeks.”
“Yes, well, we were best friends for seven years. And I’ve been in love with you for three years, five months, two weeks, five days, and… about four hours.”
“You’re scaring me a little.”
”I was approximating! Honestly!”
“I meant—shouldn’t you include minutes to go with those hours? I’m not certain I got, you know, an exact time frame.”[/QUOTE]
I do believe that this was my absolute favorite part. Of course, all of it is absolutely hilarious though. I just love this story. |
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yay GOLDY I just love all your fics...every single last one of them....heheh I hope to read others from you in the future! |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/05
Intersting story. Me likes alot. Hehe, Harry is a slow learner aint he, but i dout he'll eva give up Quidditch. I can't see that happening, but hey i mite be wrong. |
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minaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/08/05
very nice and cute the whole loosing the malfoy is funny! aww poor ron he must want to get drunk loosing to malfoy and all. great hr/h banter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/07/05
Very good story, I like the back and forth banter, it is well written. I also like how they seem so in lovel. |
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/06/05
Again not very good. It conversations didnt really mean anything. Maybe a few more chapters would have helped. Keep writing. |
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ehehehehehehe....I was wondering...how Ron reacted to Hermione coming in, telling her that she could have seen something, you know? But then, it makes you wonder, what is the lovely Weasley, Ginny, to be exact, doing there? lol...Hermione could have said that as a comeback...just my honest opinion. Other then that, I love, love it! Fluff is always good to read.  |
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CaliburstUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/06/05
There's something REALLY SPECIAL about this fic. You seem to really understand the essences of the characters. It's perhaps the best characterization of Harry, Hermione, and Ron yet put on fan fiction, in term of the characters in the books/movies translating over. The dialogue was REAL, in a J.K. Rowling way-- as if there were no middle-man writing the fic. Very good! |
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genvesselSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/05
good lord, harry, get ahead of the learning curve! slow learner, indeed!
delightful little one-shot you got going on here... i love hermione in this. excellent job. |
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Huzzah! A rounding success! Funny, cute, and sexy! You go girlfriend! |
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Ron has issues... Hm... Harry has to... Seriously : “I—hey! You’re undoing my trousers again!” hehe... Stupid boy...
Sweet little story... |
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