Excuse me. This is a fantastic fic...just to let you know, but where is Hermione. She had better be in Australia with Harry. Sorry...this is all coming from a die hard H/Hr shipper so you'll have to excuse me.

awww this is so sweet. i liked how you wrote this! i hoped that you'll keep on writing other d/g stories! haha. im a total fan of d/g haha.

Wow that was simple yet so powerful. I loved the feeling of complete utter truth, the vulnerability of each of them. Very fitting for this ship. It didn't suck! For a firstie it was really moving (ok sounding way to corny) but that's how it is!

What a great ficlet...really enjoyed your writing style. Hope you write some more HP fic.

it didn't suck at all! great job! it really flowed well!

That was excellent!!! You've got to write a lot more d/g fics! Keep up the good work!!!

Didn't suck at all!!



I loved your little paragraph intro things and your descriptions of their emotions

Oh! That was very good! I loved how you went through the motions. It was a fantastic read.



Cheers, blaze

great story, i love it when we get to delve into the minds of the characters.

Suck too bad? Are you INSANE?! This was AMAZING! The emotions you portayed through Ginny were perfectly believeable, perfectly understandable, and...well, just PERFECT! The first part confused me a bit, but other then that, the entire fic was brilliant - this was your first venture into HP fandom?? I look forward to reading anything else you have coming



~ Jacy

That was really cool. It was different and I really liked it. I'm curious to know which brothers died, but it would have been to much info in the story. Good job!