q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/01/06
You know, even if i read every rating i'm quite partial to low rating story, not that i'm a moralist, but becaus i think that it's quite improbable that Harry and Hermione would start snogging the moment they discover theit mutual feelings.
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/01/06
Logical Hermione at her best!! Your descriptions suit Harry and Hermione's characters very well. Keep it up! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/08/05
wow!! how do you come up with so amazing stories your good but (its just a suggestion) can you not write with bad language anymore. anyway your stories are great you keep me in such suspension.
hope you could write the next chapters soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 11/08/05
relate the letar to sports or something i dont know i thought it was good |
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Aww, adorable ending! *sigh* Fluff is loverly, isn't it? This was such a sweet story. It gave me warm fuzzies and made me smile and squee and was just a lovely story. Great job! I've read story lines like this before, but this one just, I don't know, stuck to me more. *shrug* Whatever the case, I'm so glad I read it. Made my day! |
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Aww, poor guy, thinking that she loves Ron and/or that she'll never feel that way about him. That must be brutal. What am I saying? I know it's brutal, telling someone you like them and then having to wait for them to answer you. Doesn't matter how long it really is between when you say it and they say something: it feels like years. You captured that perfectly. Great job! |
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Aww, what a lovely letter! I loved the slight humor ("…I'm getting a bit sappy, aren't I?"). Gave it a very Harry touch. And the way he signed it made me "aww" out loud. So adorable. I wish I could have read the original letter to compare mush-factors or something, but this was just so lovely. Great job! |
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Oh, very interesting start. Yeah for telling dreams!  Did he really not notice that in Hermione's letters to him she signed them "All my love"? *rolls eyes* But could anything more really be expected from a sixteen year old boy? (No offense to anyone; I've lived with one. I know what they're like.) Ooh, but I can't wait to read what's in his letter to her. Yeah for Gryffindor courage too! (and for sending letters to the wrong people!) |
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Like I said very good story. But just so you know Hermione is older than Harry. Her birthday is September 19th one year earlier. My dad found that out and had to change his fan-fic because of it. (just one chapter though.) Well like I said again very, very good story. |
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Let me see what goes on in the minds of boys? Well if I was Harry and I just found out I loved my best friend that is a girl, I'd probably write a letter just like that. And seeing as I am a sensitive man I probably wouldn't swear in the letter. Well good story. |
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That was really good. I think that fics where they hook up the summer before 6th year, or at the beginning of 6th year, are my faves.
Great fic! |
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aaaw it was kinda cheesy but ima girl and an emotional one at that so i understand!i loved it sooo much! God job keep writin! |
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i liked that story... i really did, until a single line in the fourth chapter. The story was book honoring until you mentioned Hermione running into Harry's arms in second year. That scene was added by the movie makers... to create a love triangle early on. Too early... I think. They were only twelve. I guess you can say i'm a purest... I like the movies... but I love the books. The story was great, it was very well written and moved at a great pace, but that one part killed the ending a bit. |
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I do like this letter better. It doesn't sound so formal! Great job! |
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Ahh shoot. Just hit the next button instead of review and I had a good review typed up. Love the re-write. The last one, if i remember correctly, was a little on the sappy side. This one is much better. Loved the story as a whole. I can't wait until you put up the second part of the story from Ron's point of view. Good luck with that. Hope you put up the second verson soon. Great story, keep up the good work! |
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