Sheesh. Did you really have to interrupt this scene with Ron???

good. now this is getting very, VERY interesting. i now want to read the next chapter.

man, you should have let the hands wander around a bit. he WAS getting aroused.

more, more, more graphic please. cause seriously. it could and should get more hot, you know?

Ahaha, now I'd like to know is where Hermione got to know all these delicious little details about kissing. Harry's reactions are great. XD

Excellent story! I've read a few that involve Harry and Hermione getting together with a similar premise, but this is by far the best of its kind. I hope to read more from you soon, and I probably will, since you've apparently submitted about a million fics here.

I just had to read your work after finding you on this site. I admired your style from AAEF. You certainly do not disappoint. Good story line, great pacing, wonderful theme.

I know this is not one of your newer fics, but it is a favorite of mine that I enjoy re-reading over and over. And I just wanted to say, thanks for that!

PA

great story! i love it! i especially liked the ending! it was great!

wow i love all of your stories! i really like how you write them!

Hot Damn! Talk about writing skills! These versions of Harry and Hermione are a real treat to read!

this was great, and sooo funny! I loved "“And I’ll never understand your insults,” Ron said, turning back to his meal. “Can’t you use more words less than ten letters long?”" Hehe.

haha seriously love this story in showing interaction b/w H/hr without really ne thing conflicting

It is getting quite interresting and i hATE THE RULE ABOUT THE 10 WORD.I preffer reviewing at the end.

I really liked your story i thought it very interesting and quite amusing as well.