I just wanted to say that I enjoy reading all of your fanfictions.Its just Pretend is one of my favorite fanfictions on portkey. I hope to read more from you in the future if not thanks for all the great stories.

This was a great story. I really love stories about how my favorite couple pretend to date then end up realizing that they love each other. I believe that that is very romantic.
All of your stories so far have been great.

An excellent story I just rediscovered... Looking forward to the re-read!
-Korval

I like how you can write all that sweet stuff without making me nauseous. Because in some harmony stories - with this rants 'I love you, I'm scared etc.' it looks werid, like they were practing hours and hours before.Just so you know - you've gotten yourself another fan of yor writing today.

Because I knew this was a completed piece I decided t wait until I finished it to make a comment, here I am a 56 year old male and I just couldn't put it down I read the whole thing in one sitting. Thank you for an excellent story.
The Spotter

there - in or at that place
their - belonging to them
"Ron stood their...he didn't know what to do" should be "Ron stood there...he didn't know what to do".

"you're perfume...you're scent, that's what it is!" should be "your perfume..."

"sound of sleep" should be "sound asleep".

Be careful with the pronouns. It was a little confusing, trying to differentiate b/w "he"-Harry and "he"-Death Eater.

"sound of sleep" should be "sound asleep".

Be careful with the pronouns. It was a little confusing, differentiating b/w "he"-Harry and "he"-Death Eater.

"Neither of them couldn't wait until tonight" would make more sense as "Neither of them could wait until nightfall (or that night to come)" considering the context

The title should be "It's Just Pretend". "Its" suggests possession, which wouldn't make sense in this context.

I've just started reading your fic, but when I can ignore the grammatical errors, I like it =]

If you want a large dose of fluff, sweetness, wonderful friendship, fun and teenage romance, this is for you. Thanks to the author for sharing.

Just browing for something that I haven't already read and happened upon this story.

It's really good! I love the interplay between the trio - very well written, and I'm really really enjoying it so far. Thanks!!

Very sweet and warm. I really enjoyed it.
One problem: There is a major issue with his/her and he/she.

ok i know i've read and reviewed this story before, but i like to re-read the stories i love...one thing i've only just noticed, call me blind or slow, but there are some spelling mistakes...i mean i'm not the world's best speller but i've just been noticing them here and there, like one is Weasley...the e is missing in between the l and the y...sorry just something i noticed and didn't know if other people had mentioned it

I like the whole build up with the story by the lake. And I like that ron wasnt acting all jelous...yet. I look forward to finishing this.