AWWW! That was so sweet. Harry is very protective. The ending was hysterical! I it!

Aww! That was adorable! Haha Fred and George are so funny! I'm gonna go read ur other ffs now! lol

(laughs) I like how you included Fred and George as the people who got them together through one of thier tricks. This is really cute. ^.^

It's a bute but quite realistic story.
And the final... it's sooo right
ByeIt's

I love this story! It was beautiful and very enjoyable to read. I hope you write more in the future!

that's awesome. i loved how one of the only rides that hermione would go on is the one that "coincidentally" breaks. also, great idea having fred and george be the match-makers in this fic. they're hardly ever the cause of harry and hermione's happiness and it is a welcome change for them to be the cause. good job, and keep up the good work.

Way to go, Fred and George! Sneaky little devils! This was unbelievably cute and fluffy and wonderful! I liked how the POV kept switching back and forth. Kept the story building.

And it was nice to see Harry and Hermione just having a pleasant day together (well, except for that one part )

Nice work! Especially for a first fanfic. I knew there was a reason you were one of my favorites!

Hee..hee...! Super cute and fluffy and I loved every word of this!

Thanks so much for writing and sharing!

Shaliza

awwwwww...this was a nice fic...

hehehhee...cute and simple...

ahahahaha...

Hermione afraid of heights...that wa a lil over...

hehehhehe...wow...Fred and George...such great guys...

nice story...

that was a great chapter. i can't wait for the next one

I can tell it's your first piece of fanfiction But of course it's still great! Haha, this was a very fluffy fic also. I loved it. Great work.

~Liv

Great work!

Fluffy goodness... I hate that ride too... I wish I had guy friend back in my teen years who had the courage to egg me on and take that ride.

Woohoo! Great story! I love it. It's very sweet. Reminds me of a story I wrote, it's a little different, but there's also a Ferris Wheel and there's (of course) Harry and Hermione .
Please write more stories soon!
Love always
Tamar

Great story! If hermione ever found out what really happened.....that'd be very, very funny to see how she deals with them. At least now she's not that afraid of heights....

You know, this story did more than just entertain me... my best friend and I just had our first big fight a few hours ago, and I settled on some fanfic to calm me down... and this reminded me of last summer when he dragged me onto the ferris wheel (with, well, just about the same results, plus me nearly passing out, and he hadn't, you know, destroyed a Dark Lord a few months previous) and I just was reminded of that warm fuzzy feeling I had at the time and it calmed me down quite a bit.

I was in tears before I read this but it really kind of put everything back in perspective for me. Bet you didn't expect that kind of response for a little fluffy story.

I enjoyed this a lot -- it was just... well... happy. Very happy. Thank you for writing it, and putting in the Fred and George cameo. That made me smile a lot.