HarrysgrlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/05
that was sweet. Hmm, i think that I would have put in under Ron/Luna. Because it's from Ron's PoV, and in the end he finds Luna. But w/e it's all good. And the story was great!! Awesome job! |
Author Feedback: I didn't want to put it in Ron/Luna category, because I wanted Luna to be a surprise in the end. |
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BoeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/05
Lovely little fluff story.
Usually don't like songfics that much but this one was great.
I also love your other stories and I'm following almost all of them
Love and kisses.
The Belgian girl |
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BoeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/05
Lovely little fluff story.
Usually don't like songfics that much but this one was great.
I also love your other stories and I'm following almost all of them
Love and kisses.
The Belgian girl |
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kof00Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/05/05
ok i felt guilty for not reading this cuz i passed it off for another song fic.. then you left a short message in you latest chapter of H7Y.. whew story from rons point of view.. interesting.. i felt kind of bad for him at first.. then as soon as we got to the ending .. everything was alll better.. another great story.. now im glad i took the time to read this.. keep it up! |
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that was absolutley awesome!!! I love sister hazel. a song that would be great to do a fic to is "Sword and Shield" from the Chasing daylight album. . . my favey SH song. So, yeah. Rather enjoyable. I think i may go check out your other fics as well. keep it up! Take care. |
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JanieBUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/04/05
Gorgeous little one shot! Lovely idea, beautifully written! Thank you!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx |
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wonderful fic. i really felt like I could identify with Ron's feelings in this story. I've never heard this song, but this fic makes me want to hear it, and if you know me that's an accomplishment. Thanks for writing this, good job! |
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that was brilliant. i really enjoyed it. i am glad that ron has found someone and that there was alot of harry/hermione in the story.
luv alex |
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EuroSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/04/05
Lovely fanfiction. Really sweet and sad. Excellent work Harrys Mistress. Really cute!
Hermione and Harry forever!!!!! there's not doubt about it. |
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Now this story was too cute. I love drunk sarcastic Ron. Even if the cannon story doesnt go into as much detail of H H wedding it might be this way for Ron
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Oh! I loved this. It was so perfectly sweet. So true. So raw and real. I can imagine the Trio like this in the coming years. Ron was brillinat and perfectly characterized. Actually, I'd love to see you do the companions of Hermione and Harry's POV, but if you don't i wont be heartbroken!!! |
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fleaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/05
i really love the song so I thought I'd read your story and I was wonderful.
I like the way its in ron's point of rewiev and recaps over his relationship and feelings for hermione and then finally ending with him and Luna.  I love happy endings.
Also the way you wrote about harry and Hermione was great, very touching
I don't usually read song fic but I'm glad i read yours.
I look forward to reading some more of your storys. keep up the good work. |
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FionaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/05
Well, that was nice. It did seem very unrealistic how Ron immediately lost the ache in his chest when Luna came around. There was no backstory given in which to assume that Ron and Luna had even seen each other since Hogwarts, but suddenly the pain that he'd been feeling while watching Harry and Hermione was just gone? I dunno.
Also, I think you should have someone beta-read your stories before you post them. There's quite a few spelling errors and incorrect words ("protest" instead of "profess", for instance) and the quality of your story could only be enhanced by being proofread.
Keep up the good work. |
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That was so  but the ending was so sweet. This definitely belonged in H/Hr, not enough R/Lu. Good job! |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/05
What an achingly sweet and bitter sweet all at the same time one shot (did that make sense?). Anyway, another wonderful story from you and I normally do not care for song fic but it all fit perfectly. Thanks for giving Ron a happy ending too. |
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