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a cat-who-ate-the-canary smile? hahaha
that was funny
great storie great idea and very well written! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/05/06
this is so cool and really well done i really did like superb! |
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RamychanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/06
Nice, short, and sweet! I especially liked the little quip by Hermione at the end.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks  This is actually the first somewhat naughty fic I ever wrote. I hope my writing has improved since then  Thanks again for commenting. |
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Oh, that's wicked. That's very wicked but very, very funny. I liked it. Nice bit of writing. But...what were they arguing about it? I wanted to know more about the dinner. I wanted to know more about everything! Oh well. What I got was good. Nice piece. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Wow, you seem to be reading everything I've written (well, not the stuff under my other pen name, which is where I post my naughtier stories now). I don't know what they were arguing about! The argument itself wasn't important -- only how they made up Thanks again for reading and reviewing. |
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SO SEXY. Harry is a god. Loved it. You're a really great writer. Nice Job.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you !! This was the first semi-naughty thing I ever wrote. Harry can be very...ingenious...when he wants to be. I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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MellisaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/05/05
OY!!! You didnt finish it!!What happend?! i was looking foward to reading "how much they liked their desserts"  Other than that I like! |
Author Feedback: Ohhh...sorry... If I'd gone further, the story would have turned NC-17 Back when I wrote it (2 years ago!) I was shocked I was even writing something R-rated. I did write a sequel but it was really horrible so I never posted it anywhere. Maybe one day I'll rewrite it so I can post it here. Thanks for reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/04/05
Great story! well written and I'ld like to read more! Keep up the good work |
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That was great. I always enjoy it when they involve food in their antics. ^_^ Great fic! |
Author Feedback: Thank you |
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you didn't get to the eating of the banana split or the pudding or the cherry or, yeah...
that was cute. but who rips their clothes off in disgust? ok, i can see a shirt, but pants and everything, too? eh, whatever, your story.
i liked it. still think you should've gone a bit further tho  |
Author Feedback: I *did* say this was the first even R-rated thing I ever wrote. I know it's got some problems (like the clothes-ripping). I never got it beta'd; I wasn't even involved with Portkey back then. Oh I did attempt to go further. I wrote a sequel but it was so bad that no one except my beta readers has ever seen it. I suppose I could try rewriting it sometime to make it worth reading. I don't like to post fics that I consider awful. If you've read my fic Bittersweet Sixteen, I had to rewrite the whole thing twice before it was worth reading. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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I enjoyed this one again, Anne!
Poor Hermione, not being able to realize Harry's love for her. I loved that Harry absolutely proved her wrong, and in such a cute way.
Very sweet!
CFFB |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Poor Hermione can be very insecure sometimes about Harry's feelings for her. He's such a clever young man, IMO. Thanks again. |
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I had to read this one again, Anne. It's so sweet! I can never get that image of Harry lying there on the bed with nothing but a ribbon and cherry on his, uh, part out of my head (and thank you for that btw ) Great stuff.
*Hugs*
Pam
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Author Feedback: Thank you, Pam. Harry can be very clever when he wants to be, at least in this story. Thanks for reading it *again* |
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MGrangerSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/04/05
You know I have very little to say after all, I mean all you rite is great what IS there to say!? wonderful work. |
Author Feedback:  Thank you! That's so nice of you to say. I'm glad you enjoyed this. |
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That was wickedly fun. I cant believe Hermione actually thought Harry would bring another woman home...I loved that ending..very creative. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I usually write Hermione as having some insecurities about her relationship with Harry. She has no questions about why she loves him, but she's always a tad surprised that he loves her. I think I wrote this story with that last line in mind. |
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That was wickedly fun. I cant believe Hermione actually thought Harry would bring another woman home...I loved that ending..very creative. |
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Pretty cute story. It had just the right amount of fluff to it. |
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