very very nice... i especially like this sentence: "Less the universal language of lovers, more a language all of their own, the detailed grammar of each other, as if being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it was with each other." - you have a perfect way of putting things ! Keep this up

Awesome fic. I love the last bit. The imagery generated by those two sentences is... unbelievable. Such ordinary occurrences, hardly noteworthy... yet the fact that they are brought out makes them simply amazing.

you have ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL writing. the imagry is jaw- dropping, your descriptions are perfect, not over done at all. you are so lucky! i wish i caould write like that. if you ever need help, i can beta some for you. great job!

Wow- That was lovely. That is the type of thing I really like- have you noticed there's been less and less of that on portkey lately?

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Musca is beginning to be one of my favorite authors. Good job! The simplicity of the scene is wonderful!

Wow, that was so beautifully written. I can't wait to read more of your work. good job!

That was great. Just a bit of everyday life, a snapshot in time if you will. It doesn't seem like many fics like this one are out there. Godd job and great fic!

Awww, so sweet! I wish it was longer though... lol. Though I suppose if it was longer, I could see it turning into a smut scene, and it's too sweet for that.

Epona

**sighs** makes me want to take a really looooooong vacation with the hubby. The details were fantastic. The sweetness of both of them was really great. I enjoyed this very much. Great job. Off to the beach.......

I love how this is a very fluffy fic (in my opinion) but there are no passionate kisses or declarations of undyling love....NO I'm mistaken there are declarations of undying love just not verbal ones. I loved "braiding" and I adore this, hurry up and post more fics , this is my fluffy romance fix for today, Thanx!


Alyssa O'Hara

really lovely. fabulous imagery, so vivid and alive. i love it. simple, but beautiful.

Hmm... Could that fic be ANY better? Listens to crickets chirping... Guess not! I really did love it -- I thought the imagry and characterizations were even tighter and yet just as vivid as in your first fic. Well done!

If JK Rowling could read this, there'd be literally no chance of Harry dying in the seventh book. Who could bear to think they'd never get the chance to live an afternoon like this together? Once again you've captured all the little details that make life the precious thing it is. Awesome writing. Thanks for sharing
Lynney

That was beautifully written. Almost poetic. It was simple yet complex at the same time. The daily routines of a couple, they make it seem so simple.
-Bryana